This was really good. The depressed angst at the beginning was well-written.

I am mildly curious, though: was he dreaming the beginning, or did Atemu return from the afterlife?

I liked it very much. You write with a lot of passion when you're doing it for the one you love. It's sweet.

Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.

Aw me like. _

Sweety, that was BEAUTIFUL!

Whew...for a moment, I really thought Atemu was gone, hehehe...

Great one-shot! Very cute. This has gotten me back into yaoi fics! Yes...nice!

Very good Valentine's Day story. I applaud your greatness. Heh, enjoy your V-Day! I luff Puzzleshipping!