 Sarah Orchard 2009-10-25 . chapter 17I HAVE STARTED AND FINISHED ALL 17 OF YOUR CHAPTERS IN ONE DAY. I AM A HUGE FAN, YOUR WRITTING IS OF A LEVEL THAT FAR OVERCOMES THOSE OF OTHER AUTHORS IN FANFICTION. PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I DON'T HAVE A BOOK TO READ AT PRESENT AND MY PARENTS WON'T TAKE ME TO A BOOKSTORE SO I NEED YOU TO UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE. |
 kitcat19us 2009-09-30 . chapter 17really great story |
 Little Fairy's 2009-09-03 . chapter 17loved it, thanks for sharring |
 fireblazie 2009-03-09 . chapter 17Oh my goodness. The passion in this was just beautiful. Like.. that fight they had? And all the UNRESOLVED SEXUAL TENSION? GAH. My heart was so unstable as I was reading this, lol. But of course, it was such a good read. Yay! |
 noisyequestrian 2008-04-26 . chapter 17Absolutely amazing. I can't even describe how much I love this story. Your writing is simply phenomenal. |
 Tearjerker22 2008-04-25 . chapter 1This is very well-written. I love the ties to the original, but you added your own spice to it, as well. |
 kapiolani 2008-04-07 . chapter 1i enjoyed this so much. some chapters had me holding my breath like i was anne/frederick. the build up to their kiss was painful, but marvelous once it happened. i literally had to pull myself away from the computer to get some sleep for myself. and your end of chapter cliff hangers were torture...i always wanted more, and would rush to the next chapter for a continuation...*sigh* hahah LOL
i hope you'll write another JAff...persuasion is my favorite JA novel, and i wish there were more persuasion ff out there.
this was wonderful. thank you for writing and sharing it with us! |
 rhapsodyflower 2007-10-08 . chapter 17Really, really, really liked this! Great job! It kinda ended a little abruptly, but it was still quite romantic! My favorite scene was the one where they were dancing...yum. And you're eloquence is brilliant, I must say. You sound so elegant, and I loved the discriptive word that you poured into the story. You are incredibly talented. |
 rhapsodyflower 2007-09-28 . chapter 1Oh, love this! Will read more! |
 Iago96 2007-08-24 . chapter 17Amazing!! So glad Anne got her guy. She deserves her happily ever after. |
 ArwenEvenstar83 2007-08-17 . chapter 17Aw, what a lovely ending. And I do believe it did stay true to the original "Persuasion", I really like this story, I could've read this story earlier, but I've been extremely lazy and haven't really been taking the time to filter through all my fanfic alerts. I'm glad I finally got around to it today though. This story is very..sweet, makes my heart swoon, haha. But really, it's very classy and I am very glad you kept the same air(?) of the book, and yet added your style it. |
 Alyssa 2007-07-25 . chapter 17 This was a great story. I loved it. |
 Eliza 2007-06-21 . chapter 17 This was a wonderful story indeed! I don't think that your story was a disgrace to Austen's work. This was done delectably...Please do write more... |
 Lady Susan 2007-06-08 . chapter 17I really enjoyed this story. Persuasion is one of my favorite Austen novels and your modernization was spot-on. |
 Randomisation 2007-05-20 . chapter 17i love this! very nice ending :D congrats on finishing. |