I read this entire fiction in one night and a half and I really enjoyed it ! XD The only thing that was slightly disappointing is the slight change in Hatori personality through the chapters. He seems so taken with Ayame in the start and then never take the opportunity to be with him while they are still allowed to. Seems like he has grown cold for some reasons. Brilliant ending though.. very sad. A sequel would be wonderful !

oh wow, i just teared up, i really did. and i'm a sarcastic, cynical... well, you get it. keep up the good work with other stories. i'll finish this one and look at the others!

Wonderful but very sad and I hope someday you will write a sequel.

oh holy shit. this last chapter makes so much sense it's not even funny! omg! the memory lapse compared with yuki and why aya treated him badly, the fact that aya always listens to tori... omg, brilliantly brilliant job of tying it all together! even the red light district part! fucking brilliant! i'm amazed. so nicely done. i'm kinda sad it's over now... now how will i get my tori-aya fix? ...seriously i'm asking a serious question! what will i do now?! oh well, not your problem. ^.^ thanks for the lovely ficcage!

wha... gure's kinky sex dream is about to come true! oh the madness! i must say i HATE threesomes, well, hate to read them, since i've never had one, but i digress. i hate threesomes, but this little bit at the beginning of this chapter was quite interesting. >.

wah... well... that was... er. i need to go read what happens next!

a matty-matt costume! yay! and daisuke and satoshi cosplayers! how cute.

poor boys. all of them. i liked the end of this chapter. it was sweet.

lordy lord nothing is ever easy for a sohma, is it? poor guys. love it! the sadness is eating me up and i love it. i'm dying to know what happens next but sleep beckons, i must yield to it. ^.^

so shigure likes aya? and is jealous of tori? or he just wanted to screw aound with aya? i'm a little hazy on that. poor gure, he IS the odd man out.

oh, so here's the lemony goodness. yay. i'm loving it (and i don't mean mcdonalds).

oh, lemony goodness soon i assume? hm. interesting. not a bad job with akito. seemed pretty in character to me. yay!

oh, shit went down. poor aya! noticed a few quote-marks (i forget what they're called... speech-mark-thingies! no... not that), but nothing horrendous.

oh ho? interesting development indeed! oh, the bits with gure were priceless. and now tori might have feelings for aya? i like! damn, you've got me hooked.

aw, what a nice "plan" gure had! he sure does love his high school girls! can't wait for more, onto the next chapter!