|Reviews for My Clouded Heart|
| pentel 7/6/06 . chapter 1
nice story...(YAY HAPPY ENDING!) that story was *insert commpliment here*
| WarpWizard 2/14/06 . chapter 1
"The old priest chuckled and handed Ranma a tower he was carrying, “Ahh, your transformation never ceases to amaze me.”
Ranma accepted the tower and grumbled, “Never shoulda told you guys about the curse… both you and Kikori love turning me into a girl! At least Renji doesn’t mention it…”"
Man, that old priest is one strong old dude...was it an Eiffel or a Leaning? :)
| PPMKatie 2/14/06 . chapter 1
Fantastic story! Had a lot of depth, and was great to see Ranma serious for a change. Loved it!
| ranger5 2/14/06 . chapter 1
Nice WAFFy ending. Like the indication that Ranma and Akane have come to stay. "Here I am coming to fulfill my duty as guardian" Perfect ending now all four/five can be happy.
| Wonderbee31 2/14/06 . chapter 1
Nice story, and good to see that Akane is able to change along with Ranma. Liked the way you had him be introspective, and hope that you might consider following it up with one from Akane's pov, and how they could have eventually gotten to the point that she trusts him at last.