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| ShakNali 2006-03-10 ch 1,  | abuseVery nice. You did a good job of capturing the team's feeling and personalities, and the cabin setting was a perfect place for it. |
| LibKat 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseI wanted to let you know I really liked this. You've made Jack wistful without being melancholy over no longer leading the team and I think that would be how he would feel. Liked the interplay of the team and how they related. Good Job. |
| sgater926 2006-02-14 ch 1, | abuseGreat job! You seem to have captured the team dynamic and each character perfectly. I'm usually one for Sam and Jack getting together after all this junk has happened, but I really like this story despite the fact that hasn't happened. I love team friendship stories that are in character and this is one of the best ones I've read. Bravo! Keep up the good work. |