Beautifully written and very much in character. I especially liked the dilemma on necessity of lying...I've been thinking that a lot and I liked the approach you took.....

I just had a fight with one of my friends about this whole straight and gay sorta thing, and MY opinion is...Omi, just tell him and don't try to hide it! It'll be worth it in the end, whether he accepts you or not. And if he's afraid of the basic public reaction, (even though it doesn't mention that in this wonderfully written story) SCREW THEM! They can take their DAMN complaining somewhere else!...aaaaanyways, this is a wonderufl story. You should really continue it. Maybe make it into as long and as difficult as you can. Different situations pop up at different times, ya kno? I looove those fics! You're going straight to my fav authors! ^^ Ja! --Ketsuki

It's nicely written.

Again, it's me. Could I also post this? It's very good.

That was gooooood!!! Omi should've told Yohji! Oh well.. Keep up the good work :)

that was sad I love it poor omi!

Poor Omi. I think he should tell him. It's sweet. ^^ Keep up the good writing. Ja ne.

Pretty good. But haven't you ever noticed that when you think, your thoughts don't come out in words? You don't actually *speak* to yourself, you just feel.

;_; Noooooooothing?! It's not "noooooothing!!!!!!!" Oy; lovely, lovely internal dialogue. Beautifully intro'd and ended so saaaaaaaaa-aaaadly!! ;_; ^_^ But it's a great story!!!

yes!! *does a happy dance* so pretty! the thought process is so real!! This is so good!