Sweet, and very well written. Though, it could use some spacing corrections.

And maybe another chapter...?

cool maybe do a sequel or second chapter

That was sooooo cute! I loved it!

Is that it?Make a whole romance story out of this Jup. it's a good start.Silver-chan

You should really add more onto this soon. *nods frantically*

That was a GREAT STORY! It was SOOOOOOOO cute! I added it to my favorite authors list, and I need reviews, and I was woundering if you could read my stories as well? PLEASE! Hallows Eve is my #1 story, next would have to be Shadows. There all good stories, or at least that's what my editer says! :) ;) 8) I love all of your stories there great, you should make a multi chapter story! anyway, I need to get back to work on my latest story idea! C YA, and keep up the good work! From, Rachel*

WRITE MORE PLZ!

That was good! I love reading your fics! Hope ya post more soon! *hugs* *Angel Kisses*

Hello, Dark Angel! LoL.. sorry, but this was just a one-time fic. But, I have another one called "Crazy" that you can read. And, if you do, PLEASE review it! No one's read it yet.. ;_; Anywho, thanks for responding!

Great story! Do you think you could write another chapter? Please? hehe. :)