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Sky-Angel14
2009-11-25 . chapter 7
WHOA!!
fanofthisfiction
2009-11-18 . chapter 8
There's a perfect balance of romance and tension in this piece. I haven't read any of your other works so I was not familiar with your other story. If this was a taste of that story, it's definitely enticed me to read it.

I liked how this one worked in the Twilight storyline and interjected your storyline of what happened that was not from Bella's point of view. With strong writing skills and romance carefully plotted with storyline from Twilight, this story is very appealing to this reader.
fanofthisfiction
2009-11-17 . chapter 7
Another wonderful installment of the story from Edward's POV. I do like the slow teasing out of the story as taken from situations he sees in his POV and from the minds of others. Discovering Bella can possibly like him and that he likes her, is the romantic part seen in a different but lovely light.

How wonderful the author has caught on to your tale and has even reviewed. It's a wonderful story that's easy to read and the twist you have on it really works. I have yet to see how it compares to her version. For now, I plan to continue reading and hope you are able to complete it.
fanofthisfiction
2009-11-17 . chapter 5
Another wonderfully written chapter. Getting into Edward's head can be tricky but much of the time he is resisting things and caught up in the moment. I like the twist of things from his point of view and the additions of Esme's thoughts in his plight.
punz
2009-11-10 . chapter 1
Awesome chapter. I will be readin gthe rest today. I'm so happy!
fanofthisfiction
2009-11-07 . chapter 4
Wow, it's wonderful the author of "Twilight" has read this tale of yours. It's very well done. Getting into the minds of others is what Edward does best, :) so I have to admit, you've done a very good job of that. Mealpiecing what transpired not in the original "Twilight" text was done very well and expressing each of the characters thoughts was great.

Not overusing Edward's mindreading ability was a good way to go. And adding Alice's vision was a nice touch.

With "New Moon" coming out, I'm sure many would be interested in reading this alluring tale re-told in a new way.
fanofthisfiction
2009-11-03 . chapter 3
You definitely make Edward's experience very human. His doubts really shine in this chapter.
fanofthisfiction
2009-11-02 . chapter 2
This was a wonderful take on Edward's POV. There's great flow and it stays true to the story indeed. Thanks for sharing.
fanofthisfiction
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
This chapter was wonderfully written and very detailed. The inner thought definitely helped to guide the story forward and for a novice or seasoned "Twilight" fan, you had enough background details to keep up. Thanks for sharing.
FarawayRose
2009-10-21 . chapter 26
That was a great story!! Im really glad someone decided to write about the rest of the story from edwards view and finally someone did it. THANK YOU so much!! I actually might try myself and see how it goes. PLEASE take it up again at some point because it's very good!! and keep up the persistence youll be a famous writer in no time!
jess carla
2009-10-21 . chapter 1
hi just to let you know stephenie Meyer has put the first 12 chapters of midnight sun on her web page.
Shadowed Nightwings
2009-10-14 . chapter 26
wow. this story is amazing! there are some things i thought of differently, but it was neat to see a new perspective! i hope you eventually pick this story back up!
thewriter96
2009-10-13 . chapter 1
I love this! It is just amazing
Alice Alee
2009-09-01 . chapter 9
Awsome chapter.
I don't even know what my fav part was, because i liked it so much! XD

~Alice
Alice Alee
2009-08-29 . chapter 8
I liked it.
my fav part was when he saw her sleeping. so *.*

~Alice
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