Neat idea for the future! Nicely done, and very plausible. I enjoyed it.

Wow. The action sequence was really cool. I like the scene where Anakin starts to embrace the Dark side. What was her reason for fighting Anakin (and his Ma)? Bounties? Sheer meanness? I've heard very little about her. :)

This story was enchanting and thought provoking. As with all of superninja's stories, there's an immense amount of detail and a poignancy that makes your heart clinch in your chest. Definately worth a second and even third look. Keep on writing such thoroughly enjoyable stories!

Uhh cool

Wow! That was intense! Great portrayal of Anakin's "journey to the dark side". I highly enjoyed it.

Quite stupid. You really should take this story off the site. It is humiliating for you, I'm sure.

Rudd must be related to Stan, Levin, and Fex

and is definitely in the minority - though I'm

sure he doesn't think so. Ignore him, my good person -

this story is excellent, as is all your work.

Keep writing. I must say - why do these people

READ our work if they think it is so dreadful?

I don't see THEM posting, now do I?

Any story with Aurra Sing in it is great! This sequence may be more accurate than we might think...

Amberleigh: Damn right and ditto baby!

I just don't get some people.

Very good, as is most of your work that I've read- I love the point of view from Anakin. The internal conflict, the promise of revenge. Excellent foreshadowing! Only problem is it wasn't quite long enough. :)

Pretty good, although I would have liked a bit of expanding in the beginning. But I liked the internal conflict going on between Anakin and Vader.