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Reviews For: One Last Night

Shara Sherenia
2008-08-14
ch 1,
abuseOh...so it's a valentine gift! -laughs-
Dark Saviour
2008-03-20
ch 1,
abuseNice work! I love this lemon! :3
Every.Step.Closer.To.The.Ed...
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseKyah!
I love this pairing...
In volume 13 (Lament) I died when Fuma licked Kamui.
*squee*
Also you might want to fix...
"and gently blew of it" to "on it".
Tehe!
Lil' Miss Spookiness
2007-08-31
ch 1,
abusewen kamui woke up at da end i bet he was lyk
"ah shit i hav ta go fight da final battle with a sore ass!"
ahahahahaha
subaru's great in this
hawt!
Crispy Rice
2007-06-21
ch 1,
abuseHot hot hot.
The Perfect Fit
2006-08-29
ch 1,
abuseYou've officially tainted me.
I love the ending that was hilarious.
Awesome job.
haha Subaru.
Lilinka
2006-08-02
ch 1,
abuseWow that was amazing and those final words from Subaru "Smoke in the meantime" ^_^
AnimeGurl1217
2006-07-19
ch 1,
abuseThat was amazing!
Chris
2006-06-01
ch 1, anon.
abusethis is a very unique story. i've never read anything like it befroe.
i really enjoyed it.

i hope i don't sound foolish but i hope you know that
Chi no ryu= dragons of earth and Ten no ryu= dragons of heaven
if it was your intention to write it as it is then i'm sorry for the correction i just though, because of the way you wrote it, you meant Ten instead of Chi.
either way it was a very enjoyable story. thank you.
0ri
2006-04-21
ch 1,
abusexD "The final words of wisdom" I love that line. Great story.
FanFicFanGurl101
2006-03-01
ch 1,
abusewow...wow
Red Kitsune Flames
2006-02-22
ch 1,
abuse"But I don't smoke." Oh that was wonderful. I loved that.
spiralstars
2006-02-17
ch 1,
abuseWoah...this story was hawt~!
I liked it, but it was just a slight bit too crucial?

ah well, the more the merrier?!

-Morrigan-chan
KamuiKamiSama
2006-02-15
ch 1,
abuseHoly crap that was hawt...*-* OMG THANK YOU SURA-CHAN!! ^O^ ::glomps:: I'm in shock though...WHEN DID YOU LEARN HOW TO WRITE SUCH YUMMY LEMONS?! XDD Great job either way though. Totally made me a happy F/K fangirl for the day. *-* Thanks again! *
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