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kitkat
2008-11-14 . chapter 5
i adore your ranma fics! and this one was especially awesome, you seriously have a fantastic view of each of the characters, and i totally agree about ryoga though not so much about koga
great, wonderful, fantastic and superb job
krizue
2008-04-22 . chapter 4
aw how cute!
i enjoyed your fic a lot!!
Semigall
2008-03-28 . chapter 5
Ok maybe it's lafor review. Still.
This fic was great, setting characters and the general mood was great.
Then there was this humour in someplaces I was laughing so hard taht even my roommates were worried.
My part was about Saotome theorem and airborne martial artist. I just laughed for two minutes straight.
xHIDDENxEMOTIONSx
2007-07-06 . chapter 5
Okay, you are on my ** list right now...I was at the very end; reading of course, and drinking my water bottle...But when I got to the part that said:

"...Also Kimiko, Tenma and Nodoka learned that when you kick panda in the groin, it will kneel over in pain..."

Water shot out of my nose and covered my computer desk...It was pure HELL getting it all off my keyboard and from under the moniter...All because you HAD to be funny...GR! RAWR! Aw well, GREAT STORY...And I would say: Yea, they got knocked up...This time it turned out like um...Let's see...Like, NABIKI! or Kasumi...NO NO BOTH, A CLEANING AND MONEY OBSESSED KID!! Alright go me and my smart self..Any way..Nice job...

~~X
The Quiet Listener
2006-11-19 . chapter 1
He he he... Ranma's EVIL and oh so secret plan! *cough cough* ^_^
Angel of Anarchy
2006-09-19 . chapter 5
Dude! this fic is RIGHTEOUS u should totally make a sequel Ranma being a mom would, like, totally scar his kids for life.

Also, Nice, Well-written fic.
Nice Job.

This is going on my favs.
Tymbre
2006-08-24 . chapter 5
. . .You need to comtinue this in a sequel!! I kinda get scared thing about Ranma getting dared to go throught pregnecy...
Zorn
2006-08-23 . chapter 5
I loved this fic...very nice endings...I kinda feel bad for Ryoga, since the other fic written by you I read I knew you hated him hehehe...

But very nice fic! congrats!
peregrine829
2006-07-26 . chapter 5
I really enjoyed your fic. I thought it was pretty funny to inject WWII references (D-Day, V-Day, carpet-bombing) into an overwhelmingly Japanese medium. Particularly clever was the "Saotome Ranma Theorem"; which is, in fact, the guiding law of the Universe, Murphy's Law: "If anything CAN go wrong, it WILL go wrong, and it will go wrong at the WORST possible moment." I'm also glad to see that someone else realizes how dishonorable that molesting bag of porcine defecation (you know who...) really is.

PS - words added as an afterthought to the end of of a story are generally known as an "epilogue"
mchenryve
2006-07-05 . chapter 5
I loved your story, It's good to seen a very good written story with Akane and Ranma. Its seems like most fan fic authors seem to hate Akane. Great job, I now 0lan to read your other stories.
chronodekar
2006-06-24 . chapter 5
This was a good read. ( I say 'was' since I read it about a week ago and only NOW go about to review it...)

A WONDER-FUL Ranma+Akane story! And your 'notes' at the end. Most informative. In fact, this is one story which is worth a read.

Keep it up!!

(^_^)

Words cannot express how I felt at the end of it all!!
Pessimist
2006-05-29 . chapter 5
Dude! Haha! That was flippin' hilarious/sweet/funny/sexi/whatever else. I totally lofed it! :DD Definately a favorite of mine.

You did a splendid job of keeping them in character through highschool, and the later years in the last chapter was a real knee-slapper. =)

I also adorded the total simplcity and randomness of it all. Your writing style is beautiful! ;)

Keep up the great work! I'll look foreward to more stories of yours.
MalletGirlAkane
2006-04-14 . chapter 5
I loved it when she bit him.

I loved that they had triplets.

I loved that she broke his arm.

I loved the names and descriptions of the triplets.

I loved Akane's plan to get Ranma's... attention.

I ADORED Ryoga at the end! Ahahaha!

This story is definitely going on my favorites.

Write more. Write both your Ranma stories (kidnapping one first!)

What are you waiting for? Get writing!
MalletGirlAkane
2006-04-14 . chapter 4
Ok... so this review is way shorter than the others. Mostly because the whole chapter had me melted into a little puddle of goo which was, quite frankly, incapable of coherant thought- much less typing.

Side note though: I can't believe Ukyo said that! (Ok, I can) Akane should have malleted her. >:D
MalletGirlAkane
2006-04-14 . chapter 3
Are my super-long reviews driving you nuts yet? Your own fault for writing an engaging story. I hope you're happy! >:P

Great line: "Now Nabiki was not stupid and knew full well that Ranma never run from anything, aside from cats and well anything generally resembling situation where feelings were involved… but he didn’t run from fights, ever."

Oh! What are Ranma and Nabiki plotting?!

Forgive my ignorance but what is "Sukebe Buta"? The scene where Ranma explained his involvement with P-Chan was touching.

Oh my gosh... want... kill... fathers... Of course it makes sense, Soun and Genma have both seen Ryoga transform. Murderous rage!

Aw... Ranma guarding Akane at Yuka's house...

This whole chapter was so adorable. I just loved the ending!
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