Not being at all a buffy fan (I'm on an anti-Gellar kick) I still have to say that itwas nicely written and, (though not meant as an insult even coming from a buffy-phobe) in the true style of the show. erm. . .I read this b/c i was looking up on old post of mine on run-on sentences (oooh! grammar!) and saw several follow-up replies to it with your name. Since I haven't heard of the other fandoms that you have written in, i read this, and gasp enjoyed it.

COOL STORY! Pleeze read A Self-Insertion Crossover Cliché, by the way I LOVED YOUR STORY! WRITE MORE!

WAY, WAY, WAY too long to be interesting. Some good ideas here, but you should have cut it down a little. Sorry, but I'm giving this a three out of ten. I'm a Scrooge, I know, but wrong stories really bug me. And this one wasn't just long it was boring. You'll never make a good story-teller!

Choice! Love the reasoning behind Xander's constant dumb luck.

LEARN TO WRITE!

That was a really well written story and I LOVED it! I could really picture the characters acting the way you had them. I also liked the mage/kith/faery stuff. You're a good fan-fictioner, keep writing!

That was really really good. I hope you write more about Tristan and Buffy!

Wonderful job with this! You had a way of combining your new characters and the mythology that surrounded them to the original storyline that created a new and interesting storyline. I hope that you continue it!

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Excellent story. I loved your new characters and they way yoy handled the established ones. The part about Xander and the kith blood he has was genius. It would explain away a lot. Write a seque. I give it an 8.

i think that this is a very well written fic. deffinetely (ignore my spelling, or lack of) one of the best fics that i've ever read. it didn't get boring, or slow, either. i can't wait to read the rest of it.

Great start more more more!