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Reviews for: Last Minute Shopping
94saturn
2006-07-16 . chapter 1
Ok this is unusual I never would have seen the multiple wives thing coming in a million years. At first I thought it was a little strange but then realized that I’m in the middle of a lemon that has Shinji, Rei and Asuka doing the bunny dance together (I can’t upload it rated MA) So I guess I can’t through rocks at least you have them married.

DC
Andy
2006-02-17 . chapter 1
cute, if undetailed.
Bob
2006-02-16 . chapter 1
hey... remove that review... what a spoiler!
Shinji Ikari01
2006-02-15 . chapter 1
I was expecting Ranma untill the word Ryoko poped up.
Still good though, you should write a few chapters for the vacation.
RahXephon
2006-02-15 . chapter 1
Pretty short and uuhh.. I didn't feel this fic was useful.. But this is my own opinion, so don't take it hard.
Dar Sel'La
2006-02-15 . chapter 1
It would be intresting to see a continuation to this at some point, that is until the wives all meet eachother. Then it seems that the universe will implode. Oh well, at least the kids will have fun.
Marine Brother Shran
2006-02-14 . chapter 1
hey that was interesting. that's all i really have to say lol. well anyways, that's all from me

Cheers ^^ Ja ne
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