That bottom line for me did it XD

The whole body of the short story was well drawn out and written but when it came to summing it all up I liked how your ending sentence brought it home. No one does these like you, lol.

5 stars!

MAX! MAX! TAKAO, PICK MAX!

lol...

takao's an idiot...

Squiz: You should do more to this :P

Ame: I liked it, you got a thing about beyblade right now or what?

Squiz: I think it was great!

Ame: -nods- and me!