   DarkFire77 11/18/02 . chapter 9Aww, I like the story. But the end if a little abrupt. Good job. ;P |
| Silver Space 8/3/02 . chapter 9 Wow this was a great story, and you might think about having a sequel. |
| Bonnie S 7/30/02 . chapter 8 I must say that this is one of my fav fics!
Oh please don't stop here!
Shuttering with excitement!
;-) |
| Penance 7/16/02 . chapter 7 Chapter 7 is the most exciting one where she's doing astral projection. What's going to happen next? Post more! |
| Silver Space 5/2/02 . chapter 7 Oh no, please keep going and post more soon |
| Ella 4/28/02 . chapter 6 SOOO NEAT! You must continue at once. LOL. Well, I won't demand it at once. I'll leave you some time, but you must write some more. LOL.
PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE! |
| Silver Space 4/28/02 . chapter 6 Hmm this keeps getting better. Keep going. |
| Katzztar 4/28/02 . chapter 5 Nice story.I love the idea of Sarah being a sorceress. Please update soon . |
| Redaura 4/28/02 . chapter 6 i like. more! |
| mkatrocks 12/26/01 . chapter 5 I love this story! You have to write more (please?)! |
| Reggie 12/24/01 . chapter 5 One thing to do is keep the dialogue on a separate line for each person. It's hard to read all bunched together like it is. Good work though. |
| Silver Space 11/4/01 . chapter 4 oh keep going please. I want to see the next chapter quickly. |
| rhiannan 9/30/01 . chapter 3 please oh please write more! |
| Carla 8/31/01 . chapter 3 Wow. Looks great so far. Please, continue. |
| netty 8/27/01 . chapter 4 the last two chapters were the same but it was cool |
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