This was terrific D

I loved it

Sincerely,

WarriorKnight

Oh I'm so pleased I found this!

This was, the first PotS fanfic I ever read...but it was on another website? I actually printed it off! That's how much I was in love with it. Then, when I lost the hard copy and went back to my 'bookmarks' the website I'd got it from no longer existed :(

I know this was written a long time ago, so I won't bother giving constructive crit. I just wanted to mention that this story is probably the reason I became so obsessed with the Tortall-verse over five years ago. Thanks so much! xxx

Good storyline and well written. Keep up the good work!

;)

Please update soon, I like the story! You let Neal have his humor, but kept it in Nealstyle, that's problaly one of the things I like most in your story.

So as I have mentioned: Please update soon;)

Your story's very good, so far. I like how you've changed the storyline(Ex-Raoul not knightmaster), but still make it believable.

Are you going to continue this story, or will it be permanently unfinished?

-Hannahtheplante

Continued... I really liked the idea of the battle simulation, and it didn't matter in the slightest that I have already read Squire. I've never been a Kel/Cleon shipper anyhow...

update soon! i like this story.

Hey! I love this story! Please, please, please finish it!

i love it, pleaz update!

xx

Ah. Very nice plot and storyline (or are those the same things?). Well, anyways, I like it. Please say you haven't forgotten about this fic? Please?

hey, i love your story. It's very unique. update soon

Is this K/N or K/C? Whichever it is, I like it anyway. Please update soon. I think that I've read the same fic, only shorter on a different website called Wildofre's Realm. If you update I'll find out what ship it is.

That was quite the surprise for Kel!

Write more!

KEEP WRITING! I need to find out what happens when Neal and Kel talk on their own! Kool story!

I love it! Now Update!

**Goddess of Reviews**