aw that was so so so cute, i loved it! like you said, there were a lot of things you wanted to include in this story, i think you've done it justice ^U^ i kind of noticed and didn't notice, if you know what i mean, it's so well written and i was like *AAWW!!* yeh, that made my day lol ^_^

hn

Dammit. I'v read this for what seemed like 20 times already? One of the best I've ever seen. xDD

(^u^) this is so adorable
so sweet
loved the 2 in this
thanx

I envy your writing skills... but your still awesome. You can write like the wind and, yes you really can write one shots...AMAZING

Oh no, I'm going to need a dentist now. Dang it. XD.
I loved this one shot!! It's so cute!

Ahahah! Nice... I liked the story a lot. XD

OMG! I'll get cavities! That was so SWEET.

Omg, that is so cute! ^^

So cute! :)

Aw...that's so sweet! Here's some sweetness for you! -hands over bag of cookies-

i love it!

that was a cute story good job writing it

Have i told you that i absolutely love you to death? well, I do. very much. You, my dear, are one of the most talented writers in the world! No... in the UNIVERSE! Yeah, that seems about right.
This story was so cute! and Sakura was being really nice, which was cool. Ususally she's a mean insensitive cruel witch. And Sasuke blushed so much! Great job, dearie, great job.
love you forever and always,
tuneia103

AW! OMG OMG OMG!
SQUEL!

[From this point on, the Earth split in half because of the rampaging yaoi fangirls.]