That was so sweet

I thought it was ok. The writing was pretty good, but I felt that Lia was Mary Sue-ish and John was kind of out of character. But like I said, the writing was good.

Lovely... How sweet.

Scitah

That was great, you should make another one. A continuation of this one.

This is a very cool idea, and I like the way you worte it. You balence out the characters perfectly.

L.S.

BEAUTIFUL! JUST BEAUTIFUL!

u get a pulitzer prize. hehe. im a terrible person, sorry. i didnt read it but hey, u got a comment right? ya know what..maybe i should just email u like a normal person...*goes of to do this* but im sure its good ;)

I really like that! It's so sweet, yet somehow sad. Maybe you could do a second chapter from John's POV? I mean, I know he's asleep during this sequence, but maybe tell his dream where he says Lia's name? Or he wakes up and comments on their position, or finds that she's fallen asleep? Just a thought.

I really did enjoy this. I hope you write more stuff about anything, not restricted to Constantine. Later! _

hey awesome story update soon

I LOVE! I never liked Dobson anyway! Lia here, on the other hand sounds perfect for our ol' John boy!