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Eric-Delko's-little-girl-4-...
2008-08-19
ch 3,
abuseoh keep going!
Impassive
2007-06-08
ch 3,
abusehilarious! update it now!
Animus Of Lacuna
2007-06-02
ch 3,
abuseFunny! Update ASAP! ☺
Amar13
2006-09-24
ch 3,
abuseGreat Job! I can't wait to see who wins! I though Spongebob would win! lol... too bad he was discualified for stupidness! lol...

One think I should say about your story is that the dialouge should be believable... I found several parts that I could never picture, like Spongebob saying 'crap' or something...

Nevertheless, the story is great, keep going!
FanFicBeta
2006-09-14
ch 3,
abuseplease update soon...wanna know who wins...!
FanFicBeta
2006-09-14
ch 1,
abusehaha-loved it!! cant wait to hear more...and to see who will WIN!!

+kudos.
93pinky93
2006-05-07
ch 3,
abuseupdate it's good!!
Cumaco
2006-04-18
ch 2,
abuseI`m dissapointed... =( It was getting good...Untill you put CURSING IN IT!

P.S.-
I was hoping Spongebob or Harry would win, too =)
Cumaco
2006-04-18
ch 1,
abuse(Laughs untill Jesus comes)

SO FUNNY!
Zim Del Invasor
2006-04-09
ch 3,
abuseUpdate soon! by the way, it's spelled quesidilla, not caseadilla.
phantomphan1992
2006-04-08
ch 3,
abuseWHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN? Please update soon... I will miss Napolean in this story.
phantomphan1992
2006-04-07
ch 2,
abuseLOL! This is so funny... are you going to win... I mean, you could just write every body out of the elevator and then you get 1 million (imaginary) dollars! I would do that in a heart beat if I were you. Update soon!
OMG Ish Luff
2006-03-30
ch 2,
abuseI like this story.
BeeDiddy
2006-03-19
ch 2,
abusehis is really funny, you should continue!!
Blondy52
2006-03-13
ch 2,
abuseWRITE MORE I MUST KNOW WHO WINS!
[a little tip, try to have believable diologe. such as, would spongebob really say crap? or [in a nerdy voice] would he say, fishpaste!]
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