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| Eric-Delko's-little-girl-4-... 2008-08-19 ch 3, | abuseoh keep going! |
| Impassive 2007-06-08 ch 3, | abusehilarious! update it now! |
| Animus Of Lacuna 2007-06-02 ch 3, | abuseFunny! Update ASAP! ☺ |
| Amar13 2006-09-24 ch 3, | abuseGreat Job! I can't wait to see who wins! I though Spongebob would win! lol... too bad he was discualified for stupidness! lol... One think I should say about your story is that the dialouge should be believable... I found several parts that I could never picture, like Spongebob saying 'crap' or something... Nevertheless, the story is great, keep going! |
| FanFicBeta 2006-09-14 ch 3, | abuseplease update soon...wanna know who wins...! |
| FanFicBeta 2006-09-14 ch 1, | abusehaha-loved it!! cant wait to hear more...and to see who will WIN!! +kudos. |
| 93pinky93 2006-05-07 ch 3, | abuseupdate it's good!! |
| Cumaco 2006-04-18 ch 2, | abuseI`m dissapointed... =( It was getting good...Untill you put CURSING IN IT! P.S.- I was hoping Spongebob or Harry would win, too =) |
| Cumaco 2006-04-18 ch 1, | abuse(Laughs untill Jesus comes) SO FUNNY! |
| Zim Del Invasor 2006-04-09 ch 3, | abuseUpdate soon! by the way, it's spelled quesidilla, not caseadilla. |
| phantomphan1992 2006-04-08 ch 3, | abuseWHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN? Please update soon... I will miss Napolean in this story. |
| phantomphan1992 2006-04-07 ch 2, | abuseLOL! This is so funny... are you going to win... I mean, you could just write every body out of the elevator and then you get 1 million (imaginary) dollars! I would do that in a heart beat if I were you. Update soon! |
| OMG Ish Luff 2006-03-30 ch 2, | abuseI like this story. |
| BeeDiddy 2006-03-19 ch 2, | abusehis is really funny, you should continue!! |
| Blondy52 2006-03-13 ch 2, | abuseWRITE MORE I MUST KNOW WHO WINS! [a little tip, try to have believable diologe. such as, would spongebob really say crap? or [in a nerdy voice] would he say, fishpaste!] |