very cute! u should write more. also keep up the good work ;)

Great story. I'm suprised Goku managed to keep his head with Lirin's brother around. Was almost certain that peeping moment was going to get him pummeled.

Gd story...one prob in the 2nd chappie...how the HELL can Goku go to houton castle? I mean...he's the ENEMY FOR CRYING OUT LOUD! He is SUPPOSED to be going there with the rest of the Sanzo ikkou to houton castle...stop the ressurection and now it's suddenly stopped 'cuz he likes Lirin?

It was really good! You write awesome fanfics!

Hey I love this fic! I wish there were more Lirin and Goku ones :igh: just one thing when you're writing what someone says seperate it from the text

I just didn't think and... well you know..." Goku sttuttered."Well, just don't do it again alright?" "Yes sir." change it into

I just didn't think and... well you know..." Goku sttuttered.

"Well, just don't do it again alright?" Dokugakuji threatened

"Yes sir." Goku gulped. It's just I'm gettin confused with who says what! please continue it!

She is so lucky, Lirin i mean. Goku is my FAVOURITE character, and i think he's hot. She gets to kiss him NOT FAIR! The story was good though!

yey! another gokuxlirin fic! where in the world are the past gokuxlirin pair writers! you're the only one left i think. can you send me sites the you can read this two/s stories?