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| Barbara Bruno 2007-11-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis Fanfiction is really interesting. I like the fact that Ares is Eve's father. You did a good job |
| RedQueen 2007-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abusePlease write a part 2 |
| Base 2 2007-03-01 ch 1,  | abuseI love everything you write. I have to be honest, though, this wasn't my favourite of your stuff. Still awesome. I love you. Marry me. Move to Massachusetts and marry me. |
| duckys-dream 2006-11-22 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant, I luv it. You've written just enough to make it your own and change it from the original but stopped in time to let us all wonder and imagine what's going to happen next. Brilliant. :o) Having said that a sequel would be lovely. |
| Quadrantje 2006-08-21 ch 1, | abuseI like this story. Even given the completely different twist, it fits perfectly into the episode Seeds of Faith. Very cleverly constructed. ME |
| aresgirl 2006-06-15 ch 1, | abuseluvs it! |
| Tzarista 2006-05-25 ch 1, | abusegreat story |
| Cougaress 2006-02-16 ch 1, | abuseAs far as your writing goes, I'm a little disappointed. Unless you're a complete Xena fan you might not understand the gist of this story. But seeing as how I am, I can't crisitise that point too much. Usually when you re-write a story to have an alternate ending, you keep going until you've smoothed out the dramas that ensue. You've left it up to speculation this time as to what Xena and Ares do, and what happens when Eve is born. Well written, as always, but very short for you. Not exactly the huge drama I've come to anticipate. Nicely done though, always a fan. |
| joxsonia 2006-02-15 ch 1, | abuseEh Lk! It's been awhile since i spoke to u...but anyway just wanted to comment on the fic...nice job as always:) u always did an amazing job when it came to writing a shipper fic without distrubing the personalities of the varioius characters. So not one but TWO thumbs up for that:) Anyway take care, Ashley a.k.a joxsonia |
| cursedgirl 2006-02-15 ch 1, | abusevery good! whana reade more about it.. =) so please hurry up! |