Reviews for World Traveller

Reviews For: World Traveller - Reviews: Page 1 of 4

KamaraKitsuia 2008-05-06 ch 1,	abuseDid you really write one with Tortall? I would love to read it! I love those books but the imortals is not in my cities libery.
NYYN 2008-03-26 ch 26, anon.	abuseI really likes the story. There was one mistake I noticed throughout the fic though. The name of the orginazation(not sure if I spelled that right) of evil angels led by Yggdrasil is Cruxis not Cruix. Other then that it was a really good fic and I look foward to the sequel. :-)
KratosManiac 2007-07-12 ch 26, anon.	abuseWow! I really liked it! I have to say, this is now one of my favorite fanfics on the site! I loved everything about the story! But there's one thing i don't agree with. It's not from the actual story, it's from something you put before a chapter. Remember how you said that Tethe'alla was in decline when Raine was a little girl? I disagree. If you remember, at the beginning of the game, they said that the previous Chosens (after Spiritua) had failed (or died) and that Colette was the seventh one. Therefore, because so many Chosens had died before they could regenerate the world, Sylvarant was in decline much much longer than it was supposed to (If you remember what Yggdrasil said: "Tethe'alla has prospered for a little too long" Remember?). Also, because Raine and Zelos are around the same age, that means that Zelos was the Chosen when Raine was a little girl. So Zelos would have had to regenerate the world as a little kid for Sylavarant to be in decline at the right time. And then Zelos would have died in the regeneration process, so the game would have changed a lot. And one last thing, for Anna (Lloyd's mother) to have been a hostbody in the Asgard Ranch, Sylvarant had to have been in decline long before Raine was born (or at least when she was a baby). That's it. I'm not saying that your definately wrong and i'm definately right. I'm just giving reasons to support my opinion. Don't be mad at me, please! Anyway, aside from that, I LOVED your fanfic! And i can't wait to read the sequel in about two minutes after i've sent this! Write more fanfics and you'll have lots of reviews from me! Promise!
Hiei-Riku-RubedoFAN 2007-06-11 ch 26,	abuseWhat a nice ending. I can't wait to see what you've done with the sequel. Again I am sorry for being so late in this story but if it helps I liked it alot! Also I'm really sorry that I couldn't review as much as I would've liked to. I like to read self-insertions. (Does that make me stupid? Weird? Not right in the head? You're choice.) I really loved the connection with the dragon and the unicorn and I thought the fight scenes were pretty good. Anyway cool story here!
Hiei-Riku-RubedoFAN 2007-06-11 ch 14,	abuseI loved this chappie! GO Nia for releasing her entire vocab on Yuan! God knows I would've done the same. ‘Did you spend your childhood dreaming of your father, Lloyd? Did you dream of that face just out of reach of your memory? Did you think he’d come and take you away, and love you just for existing? Shame everyone’s dreams are really their nightmares.’ I thought. That really made me think. I really like this writting right here. It just kinda (this is going to sound really stupid) really spoke to me! Anyway love this!
Hiei-Riku-RubedoFAN 2007-06-11 ch 10,	abuseI really like this story! I'm really sorry I can't review every chapter like I would like too! My mom's been pulling me from my computer to go run errands with her! ANYWAY! You have great moments of hilariousness in here! "Stephen’s hands whipped to his daggers and pulled them out, bringing himself to a fighting position. However, he didn’t keep hold of the dagger in his right hand, which went flying towards Kratos. He did what any sane human would do and duck. The dagger landed with a thud in one of the walls." I couldn't help but laugh when I read that. It was great. Sorry again for not reviewing every chapter and I really like this story! (Although I feel kinda bad for reviewing this story when it's long since been finished.) ANYWAY love this!
Hiei-Riku-RubedoFAN 2007-06-11 ch 1,	abuseHI! Ok I know I'm a bit late reading this but I've only just had time to really go searching around through other people's stories. Anyway, I like this story and after I read this story I'll go to its sequel. I'll try to review as many times as I can but I'm going to be pulled from my computer soon! T_T Anyway good first chapter!
Soren Aurion 2006-11-19 ch 9,	abuseHave you introduced these characters somewhere else (Nia and Stephan)? I'm slightly confused here. Oh well, it's a good story anyways.
Xekstrin 2006-09-22 ch 1,	abuseYour writing style is very fresh... I was surprised. I honestly expected something much, much worse than this when I saw the word "selfinsertion." And by the way- Nia isn't a selfinsertion. She's an OC, and there is quite a difference! Anyway... to be honest I probably won't leave many reviews. I only read this first chapter because in the sequel you mention the word 'world hopping' and that got my senses on alert. I should have known better... here I was thinking I was the only one who used the word 'world-hopping."... TTNR (Till The Next Review)
Alaia Skyhawk 2006-09-07 ch 26,	abuseWow, great ending! I REALLY enjoyed reading this. I wish I'd looked at it sooner. This is definitely going in my Favs. Happy writing :D Alaia Skyhawk
Captain-Jana-Sparrow 2006-08-31 ch 26,	abuseWay to go Mez! You finaly finnished it. I spent all day reading it from the begining. ;D
Sopor 2006-08-30 ch 26,	abuseGreat! I already miss Cyclone. I'll go read the other story now...
moon eclipse shadows 2006-08-30 ch 26,	abuseI would love to see more Nia and Steohen fics. ^.^ I can...kind of imagine Nia's necklace, but what I'm thinking might be way different from what it really looks like. ^.^' I think I get why Cyclone is gone. But, again, my thoughts may be completly different from yours. Now to review the sequel... ^.^ ~^.^~
Katana of the Jade Wings 2006-08-30 ch 26,	abuseAwesome, it's finally done! -does a little dance- I very much do want to see more. I like these characters, a lot! And I'm also really hyper right now, so I'll run off before anything untoward happens. Can't wait for the sequel!
ShinRa Associate 2006-08-30 ch 26,	abuseO, I hope you get teh sequel up soon!

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