aw! that was so cute! I loved it!

I liked the fist season much better than the second. S1 race rocked! s2 Race was alright... I loved his race-isms! so funny.

I think my favorite was "That boy could jump into a lake and come out dry" that makes me laugh.

"Colder than a catfish on marble" made me go WTF!? haha

this series needs more love! I wanted to write a fic but I have no idea what it would be about

that was cute, little odd. I don't think Race would be that lovey dovey just because she's haveing a bad day but it was still cute.
Wildfire

Despite the fact that these are old I'd like to see some new ones from you concerning JQ.

And mind not the plot, it's a nice thing to consider. Not only was it realistic but there was some wisdom to what Race said at the end. A wonderful tale.

Most likely not true since Jessie didn't join them till much later. But in this case such things don't matter in the least.

There were quite a few typos on the first two chapters but nothing major.

I'm a little concerned about the shortness... I think you could write so much more. These didn't even need to be in chapters.

Nice characterisation, dialogue was wonderful. And everything was just neat. Good job. Let me know if you write any more for JQ.

So sweet. I loved it.

Really nice!

This is pretty good. Nice to see the soft side of Race. Please keep writing!