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KCS
2008-06-21
ch 31,
abuseYAYAYAYAYAYAY! NEW UPDATE! 8D

Klink watching the basketball game was so adorable I almost (almost) went massively AWW over everyone's favourite Kommandant. :)

Geez, someone needs to just get rid of Hochstetter once and for all, the filthy *&@#$@*. Good thing they have Newkirk, nein?
marilyn p.
2008-06-17
ch 31, anon.
abuse"What if Hogan really was the mastermind behind all of the sabotage? What if he had somehow found a way to conceal his wounds?

Klink snickered, chuckled, then burst out laughing until tears leaked from his eyes. Conceal wounds! Not even Hogan could be such a magician as to pull off that feat!"

"When swine soar, eh, Herr Kommandant? Of course, you can't tell with Hogan. He might just be crossing a pig with an eagle."

Good work. I like the Klink scenes best. They are just like him.
L J Groundwater
2008-06-15
ch 31,
abuseAh, a nice treat to find waiting for me when I got home from the coast. Poor Klink-- can't decide if he's wrong and drunk, and right and stone cold sober.

Hopefully, he'll always believe the former!

And yeah... fast is better. But... OW!
smithcrafter
2008-06-14
ch 31,
abuseSneaky, but are you ever going to let Hogan find out for sure that Klink knows? FYI, you DO realize, don't you, that whenever this story is completed, I'm going to have to go back and read it all at once?
KCS
2008-04-13
ch 30,
abuseWonderful!

Loved the Hogan/Kinch 'mom' banter, as well as Carter's faith in future invisibility. Heehee! Loved the chapter!
scc1fan
2008-04-13
ch 30,
abuseWonderful to see an update again. Been looking forward to it! Great job...and I bet those boys sure are glad to hear Hogan formulating plans again!:)

Kas
Linda (just not signed in)
2008-04-10
ch 30, anon.
abuseI was SO happy to see the alert for this in my box when I went on my lunch hour (ok, my lunch 45 minutes).

I'm glad Kinch is there for Hogan to help sort himself out and decide whether good things are happening to him because of his visit to Romie and Josef or not. And I'm glad Hogan was able to give Kinch back some assurances as well.

I always enjoy your writing... I sit back and savor some of your choices of words-- brushing the fingers of his hand, the light going off in his head with full orchestral accompaniment... you enjoy words, and it shows. And I love getting to read it all.

Thanks for another great addition to the story!
smithcrafter
2008-04-10
ch 30,
abuseAnd back to work they go. I'm still waiting eagerly for each update. Don't worry. They're worth waiting for, even if it is hard. :)
ML Miller Breedlove
2008-04-02
ch 28,
abuseUnconditional acceptance. At last its safe to grieve. And I felt every painful step.

You have such patience setting the scene; no detail too small. I can almost feel the heat from the fire and hear the coffee cups clank as they're set beside each other and forgotten.
KCS
2008-02-26
ch 29,
abuseAw, that was so phenomenal! I love each scene individually, and as a whole they make a marvelous chapter. Well done!
majorbookluver
2008-02-26
ch 29,
abusehe he he... i love the things he can count on! they were really funny!
majorbookluver
2008-02-26
ch 28,
abuseaww... poor Hogan! Good job on all of the descriptions! It was really good!! Love it!
L J Groundwater
2008-02-26
ch 29,
abuseOK so I didn't go to bed so I could get up in the middle of the night for that interview. I had to read anyway. So I did. And of course, there was never any doubt that you would bring me happiness in reading. I'm thrilled with this chapter.

Hogan has some peace, Romie has peace, Josef has his contentment, and even Mozart's back in the good books.

Only poor Kinch has trouble now! LOL

OK off to bed... there are many questions to ask at 4 AM! :)

Congrats, as always...
smithcrafter
2008-02-25
ch 29,
abuseI was so glad to see Romie finally get back into the story. Having Mozart there, and Hogan's comment about it not being his fault either, was a perfect touch.
The Swordsman
2008-02-25
ch 29,
abuseAnother great chapter. Keep up the swell work.

The Swordsman
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