I absolutely love your writing! I just finished reading the first book of your phoenix series. One thing though. I don't think Clark knew about the meteor rocks till the third episode.

That was so good ans so sad! Can you continue the rest of the Pilot like that? Please?

good

I like it alot! You did an awesome job of catching Clark's thoughts.

LOVE it...added you to favorites.

Hmm...interesting idea...a bit of angst there, isn't there? You did a good job.