Congratulations to the family! Now I don't know how will Brock react to the situation... Hope that they won't be in danger!

great chapter yet again! please update soon!

Melony isn't showing yet so the baby wouldn't be big enough for them to tell the sex. Aww, I'm so happy Chris is okay. Good chapter, update soon. :)

Um...AW! OMG that's so sad. I mean you know, happy, but heartbreaking in a way...lol! How dare you bring tears to my eyes after all this! I HATE YOU!! :P But aw!! Seriously, this was one of those schmuffy lovey moments that totally pulled at the heartstrings. Like, if I had been watching it, I would've started crying but blamed it cause of the salsa in my eye or something! XD Chris and Mel are so beautiful together!! I can just see the reaction on Chris' face when the doctor said "baby". I mean OMG! They're so b eautiful. I HATE YOU AND YOUR CLIFFHANGERS!! Is it a little Chris or a Little Mel? E! *shameless giggles* I love family drama. I mean..uhh..I hate babies! Roast them over an open flame and feed them to JoeJoe! Oh who am I kidding...I love teh babies...

How'd Mel's wrists get burned THAT bad. Aww poor Chris. Good chapter, update soon. :)

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OH my god! Please tell me this isn't the last chapter!! OH NO! But OH MY GOD!! I loved when Benoit BUST through the door and was like "you're gonna die Lesnar!" because I was SO hoping he was going to bash his head in but oh well he didn't but now Lesnar's caveman ** is in jail! HAHAHA! Let's hope he doesn't drop the soap!! His ** ** is going down!

Man, I'm so glad Melony is OUT of his evil clutches now! The fact that she and Chris are back togeter just makes me SO happy. I can't believe you shot him, though!! how do you shoot Benoit? :P JUst kidding. I can't believe BROCK shot him. Dude is SUCh an **!! Oh things are gonna be so squuishy now!! I mean, cause you ARE gonna post MORe chapters so you don't leave us hanging, right? All I ask is for two mroe! Two more chapters just to follow up!...ok, one? Is that too much to ask? Just one?!

And cause you know I love it...

"Promise me you'll dress up like a drill sargeant and make me do dirty things to you"?! LKJF:OSIURJ)*face*kj58es8gds5! *face plants onto keyboard* OH MY GOAAWD!

Oh. Melony's gonna have a babby!! See! There's a whole new story right there!! Autumn and Molly dragging chris to the baby store!! HEHEHEHEHE!! *giggles 4 babies* Mel and Chris will have shexy babies!

Great chapter! :] Please continue!

I'm happy they're finally there. Poor Mel, Brock is such a loon now. Great chapter, update soon. :)

Great chapter again! Please update soon!!

OHMYGODYOUTOTALLYUPDATEDTWISTEDDECEPTIONSOHMYGODITOTALLYLOVVEYOU!

Brock is a total **!! Did he seriously say "house in the midwest" and "I can go back to the WWE and you can be a homemaker"? Seriously? OH my god! He really IS a caveman!! I always thought I was joking, but no! He's totally archaic! WTF?!

And oh my god!! Shannon, Chris, and Dave are like...total hot, badass rogue vigilantes! It is so freaking awesome!! I can see them having their own tv show and beating people up with golf clubs and 2-by-4's every week! Oh...in a perfect world...

God, I can't wait for Chris to get his hands on Brock! It's going to be undeniably sweet! And just so you know you're a total maniacal genius. This story is beyond words, it really is! You don't know how much I hate the fact that I know it's ending soon...please...please don't let it end! Please let the guys be vigilantes and save Melony just a little while longer!! Oh I can't believe you only posted one chapter...but at the same time I'm kinda glad because that prolongs the end...oh damn you!!

Divorce papers! WHAT! Is he going to force Mel to sign them or has he forged Chris's signature or something. Great chapter, update soon. :)

DAMNF REAKING FANFICTION DOT NET!! I've been sitting here waiting for the review box to pop up for like ffiteen minuites!! ARRGGH! *killz* And you wanna talk to ME about short chapters?? OH MY GOD!! This was like a scroll and a half...aka, NOT LONG ENOUGH WHEN WE'RE TALKING TD! All TD chapters should be atleast twnty KB apiece! :P :P :P Now...ONTO the chapter!

OH MY GOD!

Brock's going to force Mel to sign divorce papers? Then what? Club her in the head and drag her back to his cave?!! "Oog ogg. Pretty lady bake me cookies. Grunt grunt." DAmn you aboriginal blonde buffoon! *kicks him in the face* *breaks foot* OWW! Sorry...BRock makes me MAD! He's such a sicko. I hope Benoit beats the crap out of him when he finds him!! BUt leaves a nice piece for Melony to abuse, too! Haha!!

And I love the fact that Shannon's gonna beat the crap out of a Basham...any Basham. Ha! NO one can keep them straight! I bet even Autumn forgot form time to time...EW! *shakes head* Never mind...

I hate so much that I know this story is ever so slowly coming to an end. I'm probably literally going to cry when the last chapter is finally posted!! You know, you should never feel bad about your stories because this one just goes to show you how much you've improved in your mad writing skillz. Your dialogue flows(you're such a doosh for ever complaiing about your dialogue), as does the whole chapter. And I still think you capture peoples inner thoughts and feelings with much more ease than I do! Mine's a little forced. Your's floowss...floows...fflows. :D

Ok, I'm going back to check my inbox and hope ou've posted another chapter of this Dominant story from you the most dominant author on fanfiction dot net(Plus, my arm really hurts cause I scratched it and then scraped it across the jaggedy wooden desk...ow...) and if not youw ill SUFFER MY BAGWELL WRATH!

Great chapter!! R.I.P. Chris!!

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OH MY GOD!! Re-reading this, it was just as SHOCKING!! (I HATE WEBTV FOR NOT LETTING ME REVIEW IT THE FIRST TIME! *KICKS*) To quote the original un-left review...


...AH!

How the hell did this happen? Molly played CSI! SHE PLAYED CSI DAMN IT! BROCK INNOCENT! HE HAD NOTHING TO DO WITH IT! REMEMBER? DAMN YOU MOLLY FOR NOT GETTING ALL THE EVIDENCE IN! DAMN YOU! *kicks* Grissom would SO not be proud...

OH MY GOD!! I swear on my life, I didn't see that coming. You had me so convinced that Brock was innocent, and then I got all wrapped up in Mel and Benoit's lurve and Shannon and Autumn lurve and Benoit and Autumn's brotherly/sisterly bonging(bonding I mean, bonding!) and it was all so brootofurl that I forgot about him! Holy crap. And leave it to Doug, idiot basham he is, to leave on foot. *slaps forehead* I hope Benoit finds him and lets loose some REALY toothless aggression and kicks his scrawny ** into oblivion!

Poor Montel, though...he got toally fooled into it. *shakes head sadly*

OH MY GAWD I WANT MORE!...Who's Art? XD

Wow, awesome chapter, it really was Brock, the guy everyone first thought it was. But I knew Doug was involved in some kind of way lol. How did Brock find out about the baby? I can't believe MVP helped all the because of the US title, and a few bills, what a moron. Great chapter, update soon. :)