please tell me ur gonna update soon cause it's really good anyway please update soon ^_^

I LOVE THIS STORY!!

Update soon..!!

~^Melinda^~

You don't need a lot of words to make a great chapter! I love this one...

Thanks

Yes Naruto's smile can do those things...

I really like how this story is easy to follow even though it's not really 'in order'. It's very interesting and I can't wait for more. Keep it up.

Well I just read this whole thing and I thought in all it was really great except the last chapter. Have you ever read "Two Sides" I think is what it's called, where Naruto and Hinata are partnered trained by a woman named Sora? It's a really good fic. I think you should just write this whole thing out as a reagular fic but I undestand that sometimes trying to come up with what happen's inbetween the story can be a bitch. I also want to say I know what it's like to have a much better younger sibling like Hinata has Hanabi and you with yours. It dosen't bother me that much at all anymore but when I was younger it sort of did, however I'm the real mellow type and I don't try to compeat with other people. Well hope you update soon.

OMGNW So it's awesome just write your chapters i want to finish unless you're done. so anyways i might start a fic kudoz to you.

I love it! They're an excellent team, and have an interesting sensei lol! I wonder how far they'll surprise him lol...

Thank you!

Nice

I'm so happy to see you updated! I've been hoping that someone would, and to top it off, yahoo has been dumb, and I haven't been getting my updates... (but enough about me).

This was a great chapter. I usually don't like non-chronologically ordered stories, but this one is so good. I liked the introduction of Hinata and Naruto working together as pairs. Keep up the good work!

Cheers

- shadow

Really an excellent story, I like the plot and hwo you describe the characters, Pls update soon.

Good. Exceptionally good. Downright excellent.

Though I would try to avoid parentheticals (e.g. "Naruto had called forward two shadow clones (he only used one hand to make the seal) and within a second, the two genin had made their move.") If you need to say something try to make it fit into a sentence, rather than just putting a minor note there. One of your best talents is your ability to suck us into the story and when you put something in parentheses it totally ruins that, plus, it just doesn't look cool to have ( ) in a big block of text. Sticks out like a sore thumb or something...

Keep writing.
N.i.V.

ya another chapter. I haven't seen any chapters for this story lately and then poof here it is. I'm glad this story is still alive and I can't wait for the next chapter

it's a shame not many people review this..it's really good.

the only thing ya gots to do is put it in chronological order once you finish..other than that its good! keep writin' i luv it.

Wow, its been a long time but great chap!