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| Koyi-chan 2007-10-30 ch 1, | abuseKoyi-chan: I cried, it was so beautiful |
| xMkx 2006-11-07 ch 1, | abuseOhmygod. There's this tight lump in my throat, and it refuses to go away. That was amazing.. And really heartbreaking, but I love it. Wonderful job. < 3 |
| 1N1GMA 2006-09-27 ch 1, | abuseOMG! DAT STORY IS SOO SAD! IM CRYING RIGHT NOW! LIKE REALLY CRYING! WAHH! SHESHH! DAT JUST SO SAD! I THINK U DID A FINE JOB...WHOEVER MADE ME CRRY IN A FIC...DID A GOOD JOB...AW...MAN...SO THATS WHY HE WAS LIKE CRYING AND MAD...WAHH! RIKU AND DARK FOREVER AND EVER! |
| SpiritualEnergy 2006-06-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. I absolutely loved this. The details were beautiful, and the emotion was just right. Very bittersweet, and I love the part where you mentioned the Phantom Thief. Very nice touch. Beautiful. Wonderful job! |
| Fyadora Lyryn 2006-06-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. But was the literary referance to the poem or the book :The Silver Kiss? let me know I'm interested. Again good job. |
| Riku Love. 2006-06-20 ch 1, | abuseWow. Just . . . Wow. No words can really express how wonderful this story is. I felt capitivated, the whole while I was reading this. It actually brought tears to my eyes, which doesn't really happen when I read these. The Rose scene especially, caught my attention. To me . . . it just seemed so 'real'. Not romantic, not anything. Just 'real'. I love all of your stories, and hope you continue on writing. And, I couldn't spot the literary reference in the title. I have a vague idea of it, but I might be wrong. |
| Kawaii Hina-chan 2006-06-06 ch 1, | abuseaw so sad why did u make it a oneshot its soo good! if u make it a story can u please make riku come alive again or sumthing? plz plz plz |
| redbutterfly88 2006-06-04 ch 1, | abusekawaii!hope you'll write more stories about them soon!!Tc!! |
| Crimson Rayne 2006-04-26 ch 1, | abuseOMGOODNESS! ...why...does Riku die? WHY DOESS SHE KEEP DYING? T^T lol its soo..sad... but beautiful... -sobsobsobsobsobsob- ah...im soo depressed XD hope you updated LA Fraise sooN~ i love that story ^.^ |
| The Squabbit 2006-04-05 ch 1, | abuse*cries*AWW!!darn,she jus had 2 die*pouts*ITS POSETA B HAPPILY EVO AFTO!!*stomps*tis sucks! |
| star-chan 2006-03-11 ch 1, anon. | abusewow that was so sad. yet sweet..it was really good.=] |
| Heart's Door 2006-02-20 ch 1, | abuseWait. I'm confused. I thought the dude was Daisuke? Er. . . Anyway, I loved this. It was touching and cute. ^_^ Not many stories nowadays talk about two people always staying together and stuff. Very sentimental. |
| Elegant Tragedy 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abusewow that was so cute really. I was a little confused at the begining but it didn't take long for me to figure it out. ^^ keep writting. It was really adorable |
| heka 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseyou're an excellent writer! whe! this is really really fantastic! it's very interesting how you portray dark as the hurt person here, as it's always riku that's been hurt and etc and dark's there to comfort her. so.. yeah it's a great twist! :) though i AM wondering what kind of woman would cheat on dark... fufufufufu... this kept me guessing for a while, i thought riku was pregnant until erm i saw that dark was upset about it. lol. whoops. haha cookies for you! :D |
| RikuDarkDaisuke 2006-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was beautiful...so beautiful... |