Having finally finished reading these two rollercoaster of emotions (otherwise know as your fics), I am so glad I decided to read them. I LOVED your portrayal of Ray and his thoughts, they are so hilarious - though my favourite is Brooklyn and Ray's theories about whether Kai's Grandparents were alive :)
Thank You for writing such enjoyable fics for people like me to read.

a...a...a... SEQUEL!??>!>!?!?!?!?
A MOTHER FUCKING SEQUEL!??!?!?!
I COULD KIS YOU!
but that would be weird,
and the fact that i have not the foundest idea where you live,
so i will just say this:
YOU ARE FUCKING AMAZING! <3

I <3 Nana ^_^

I honestly love you now. I really do :P i read this story for the third time and it just doesnt lose the charm!! Ur the best

I'm not sure whether you're evil, a literary god or brilliant. One third of the time I spent crying, one third laughing, and another third both at the same time. You even had me sobbing. Several times. That just doesn't happen... (Once again I wonder why I love reading angsty things so much. Then I remember what I've just read, and stop wondering - it's just too good to stop.)

Declarations of love. You've earned them twelve times over.

I need a big cup of tea.

i just read this story and the christmas one in like one day^^
it was just to good to close(exit outta the screen that is)
i really luved it!
this is the first beyblade story that i've read an really liked!
so yea!
awesome story!

This has to be the best story I've ever read. It was a bit wordy, but you got the point across perfectly. Good luck in all future works.

I'm taking Russian right now so my vocabulary has improved. Though I still can't curse colorfully in Russian. I can see how Tala would like the word "nyet". It's very fun to say. :P So is "do svidanya" (goodbye).

i absolutely love this story :) our first nowl wasd also an amazing story, and this one completed it :), i was actually crying when kai and ray had a fight over the whole affair thing.. omg and the comical relief parents were halarious,the best funny part was when ray's mo was trying to get the people out of the tv then after there dicussion ray turns the tv back on an is like there still trapped lol so clasic :), i absolutely love ur writting style your stories are fantabulous :)

peace out for now from miella allstar

This story was amazing! Seriously, there were momements where I laughed like crazy, moments where I wanted to cry so badly, and those OMG moments (like when I thought Kai really did cheat with Tala).

I was so happy when I came to the ending because I knew there was no way it could be true! I mean the love between Tala and Bryan and the love between Kai and Ray is so obvious!

Finding this story really made my day! Thanks!

wow that was so good i loved it and ray was so funny the whole time...good job
- ToRrI

Wow. I was captured up untill the very end. It was all a lie! heh. never saw that coming.

I am confused about one thing though. Sorry if you did cover this and i somehow missed it, but i have to ask: What was that thing about Tala and Konstantien? Kai mentioned that they 'did' something a few years ago, and it was never explained. could you enlighten me? i'm really confused.

I think my favorite part of this chapter was Bryan's reaction to Ray's revelation. Oh Bryan! He's just the biggest sweetheart ever! When he started crying I was squealing so loud i'm suprised my laptop screen didn't crack. Good thing I wasn't in the library. heh.

I also really love how his and Ray's relationship developed over the corse of the story. How sweet they are! (in a hate your guts kinda way).

One more thing. as much as i LOVED your fanfic, I don't really understand the purpose of Kai 'testing' Ray's devotion. Wasn't Ray clear about his feelings from the start? HWy should Kai doubt him?

Well, now that this is done it looks like i can go back to doing my homework like the good, devoted student i am. Untill you update Sinners that is. haha! don't worry, no pressure. I just re-read the whole thing actually (seeing as I somehow missed you updating it TWICE) and have come to appreciate it all the more.

Wow. that's the longest review i've ever written. I'm tired now.

'gnight!

Another brilliant fanfic, i love it, im definately favouring this

Aww, no red hot monkey sex? -sigh-

Well, at least it's a nice happy ending. The big jerk was defeated, and no one cheated. Yay! What a wonderful piece, great job!

But no red hot monkey sex. :(

More pieces of Godlike masterness, I loved this and more people shall read this... I swear OO