I love this! I wish though that it had been a surprise to al too though not just Winry. But u should keep writing fanfics like this. Check out mine on this site too under the username mustangsnaps. I hav a RoyxRiza one and a DracoxHermione one and a bones script piece I wrote. Your writing is great

GREAT STORY! although i was waiting for hawkeye to shoot somebody :D anyway! great job!

-fros

Gosh, I was going through old fanfics since very few good new ones come out, and I re-stumbled upon this gem. I still love this story as much as I did back when you first wrote it. 3 Just thought I'd pop in and say hello!

I've noticed something.. Almost every time you use a "-" there's supposed to be a comma, it's kind of annoying with all the "-"s.

Excellent story. I enjoyed reading it very much. Did you know that only one chapter of this story is on adultfanfiction . net? I was rather disapointed, 'cause I wanted to see how your lemons are. If you could email me the one you wrote for this story I would be very grateful. my email address is shoeterfly

Thanks much

Shoe

Great Story! We all know that Roy is a pedophile! Thank you sending me the lemon too. that was very good too. Great, what more can I say? Except that I hope you make a sequel! * hint, hint*

*claps enthusiastically*

Great story! Took me a few days to read all of it but it was worth it!

Truth be told, I read this for the slight RussellXEd but I love the ending greatly!

Perfect writing style, fast but enticing. You give enough to make them want to keep going!

10 out of 10!

I liked this story. Different than I expected. I'd like to see the RussxEd ending.

i took me forever between classes to read, but finally made it!

it's great!

Loved this.

RusxEd!

oh, make a mainly FletchxAl fic, i dont see too many based on them, in Al's real body, any way...

wait a sec, they dont even have the Tringhams in the characters columns!

ive been meaning to leave a review for this one. i absolutely loved it. i actaully cried at the end. it was really sweet. ive written and read many fanfictions, but nothing come close to this one! i really loved it. Keep writing! Saruwatari Momo Chiaki

I loved it...although I was looking forward to a RussellxEd alternate ending... I loved this. Reading it made me go to bed later! D:

...

But I still loved it.

You have my, er...'gratitude'.

-TheOneYouCallWe-

xD I can just imagine Ed...

-Ed jumps Roy, but seems to land unproperly, hitting the colonel's back, and falling onto the ground-

If I only made a video of what I'm visualing...**

-laughs at Roy's sex joke-

geh heh heh. End it with the title of the ff. Funkeh. xP

...here-geh-gur-ger.

Again. Can't say much about this one either.