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| Anna Jaganshi 2007-03-02 ch 9,  | abuseUh-oh, things are getting tricky. Stupid-snake-thing-that's-being-controlled-and-crap, hope you die! lol Nevermind me. I hope you do keep updating this, though. And your other stories! |
| icefox94 2006-09-24 ch 9, | abuselast chapter on here. that makes me sad. Wah! (starts whining) you need to write longer chapters, woman. lovely story though. i love all the blood and gore. i thought that one of the wards got on kurama from how he was reacting, seeing as how he was wounded the most last time and is probably still a little weak from it. i don't think even kurama can heal that fast. update soon. ^^ |
| blood.of.a.phoenix 2006-07-09 ch 9, | abusePoor Hiei. Why is it always him getting his energy drained? Every single story I've read today had something to do with Hiei having badluck. Anyway, goo story. Keep up the good work! |
| animelover6000 2006-05-12 ch 9, | abusehey i am happy that you wrote and i cant wait untill you write more to this story k bye:D |
| xXLexi-PikachuXx 2006-05-12 ch 9, | abuseOk, I reviewed. Glad that you're finally getting over your writer's block. Hope it stays that way. |
| Kuro Mizu-Kitsune 2006-05-12 ch 9, | abuseOh my god your evil!! Lol. Not really, but that's ok. I love this story and you cut it off there (pouts) so mean (sniff sniff) Lol. Update soon! Please I can't wait. |
| KyoHana 2006-05-12 ch 9, | abuseWOW! Great action-packed chapter; and giving us that glimpse into Kemuri's past was truly inspired. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait for the next installment. |
| All Things Anime 2006-03-16 ch 1, | abuseSweet first chappie... |
| Kuro Mizu-Kitsune 2006-03-10 ch 8, | abuseYour having a writers block too? I can't write fight scenes either. For one of my stories I have to write a rape scene and it's not working to well. T-T I'm so sad. Lol. I can't wait till you update next! Good luck with the fighting thing!! |
| xXLexi-PikachuXx 2006-03-08 ch 8, | abuseYay you updated. I like fight scenes. Update soon. |
| Kuro Mizu-Kitsune 2006-02-24 ch 7, | abuseI loved the part where Yusuke got the pebbles into Kuwa's mouth. That was funny. |
| xXLexi-PikachuXx 2006-02-24 ch 7, | abuse(Laughs) Poor birds were probaly scared for their lives. Update soon. |
| KyoHana 2006-02-22 ch 6, | abuse'Implying' is a good thing. It lets the reader's own imagination take over and supply their own details as to what transpired. And just for the record, the way you are writing the Kurama/Hiei pairing is wonderful. Keep it up! |
| KyoHana 2006-02-22 ch 5, | abuseOh I LOVED the kitten's reaction to Hiei. And Hiei's reaction to the kitten was so in keeping with his character! Wondeful chapter... keep them coming!! |
| xXLexi-PikachuXx 2006-02-21 ch 6, | abuseHi-chan, I like that name. And who new Hiei could be so cute. Update soon and I'll have to check out your other story. |