I just finished the fifth of march yesterday and decided to switch from my twilight habbits on fanfic to read something else...and found this...Yeah please update soon its good!

Aww I love it. I'll always have a special place in my heart for TFOM.. It's the first book of Ann's I ever read :-)

i totally JUST finished this book and I loved it. great work

nice job...will you ever update?

huzzah! this is a great start... i really like it. i don't think it's cheesy... anyways... please continue!

You are my hero! I wish you to continue writing this story! Finally, someone who read 'The Fifth of March' too! I might write a story about 'The Fifth of March' if I get an account. Please continue!

Okay, this was pretty good for your first try, but:

Rachel never made a promise to see Matthew again, and they use the word "damn" way too much. It's just cheesy.

Other than that, it was great. The title's awesome, too!

Keep working on it!