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| Spiecas 2006-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseIs this your first fic? If so than you're off to an excellent start. I really like your character, Eiji. It's nice when an author's OC is younger than Netto. MAkes the story more intresting. By the way, how old is Eiji and how do you pronounce his name? I can't wait to see who Enzan's date is. I hope it isn't Yaito. She's so shallow that I can't stand her. I also hope that it isn't Anetta, (although she isn't as bad as Yaito). Len: Well if it isn't Yaito or Anetta, who would it be?! Pixel: I thought you hated those two. How come you're saying it should be one of them? Len: I'm not. I'm saying that there aren't any girls close to his age left. Pixel: What about Mary from Battle Chip Challange? Or the author could just use an OC. Me: You guys do realize that this is MY review, don't you? Len & Pixel: *smirking* Yes. |
| Fenrir of the Shadows 2006-02-26 ch 1, | abuseGood Story!Well described,has good length, and is very well written. Keep up the good work. |
| Rose Kitsune.EXE 2006-02-25 ch 2, | abuseSque! I love it! Where's Enzan-sama? And his horde of fangirls? XD I love it! Please continue! ^^ |
| Ri2 2006-02-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseWhoa. Cool chapter. It was nice to see Hinoken man again, no longer affiliated with an evil criminal organization...right? And poor Eiji, stuck in that dress...XD Very creative use of Geminiman. That was cool. |
| Rose Kitsune.EXE 2006-02-16 ch 1, | abuse*applause* Cool! I like the idea of this VR realm. It something new, and I like that! ^.^ Great job with the battle scene, by the way. Well done. I look forward to more! ^.^ |