 Arien Star 2006-02-16 . chapter 1Oh my God. This was so beautiful. I loved the way you juxtaposed the wedding vows with Ennis's inner pain- so poignant. And your use of similes and metaphors to convey emotion was just amazing. The little poem at the end fit so well with the rest of the fic, tying it all up beautifully. Fantastic work :) |