That was a pretty interesting story, and I really enjoyed it =3

It's been quite a long time since I saw so good a YGO fic. Though your writing can appear quite a bit strange (especially with the lapses in the timeline), it's quite pleasant enough.

wow awesome fic! i'm giving you a two thumbs up for this :)

Wow, nice story

YAY ! ! !
this story is really great *_*
perfectly done <3
and it's funny too XD
greetz tama ♥

brilliant, brilliant story! loved yugi and ryou, pure evil. i loved the 'poisoned honey' joke too! :-) isis and shada were funny too, even if i do feel sorry for them! lol

Lol. I loved reading this story! It was really amusing. ^_^ Thanks very much for writing and finishing this story!

Ah, a brillant piece of writing to reread again =D Enjoyed it the first time, and enjoyed it again. Thank you so much for such a great story!

i absolutly LOVE this story! it's very good.

I LOVE this story... kawaii desu~

You even incorporated Noa into this! How sweet. And wow, I can't believe Seth got to travel to the future for a time. Everyone was surprised when that happened. Sneaky Yugi and Ryou. They're so adorable though still.

All the hype about Atem and everyone's return to Egypt is so thrilling to read. It's great that they get such a nice reception. And it's always so sweet how protective Kaiba is of Mokuba. It's nice to see that he and Bakura seemed to have lightened up some.

Betting pools and pranks while waging war simultaneously. Well, it's comic relief at least and they're certainly winning the war by a landslide. Yay!

Cool. I like how you give Yugi and Ryou more important roles here as Hikari. Usually it's always Atem and Bakura with all the action since they're technically the ones with all the magic. But I would think that Yugi and Ryou could do it too, being Hikari and all so it makes sense.

It's interesting how Seth and his council are describing Yugi and the others since they seem so different and the Dark Magician girl that's so similar to Mana, etc., since they don't know them exactly yet.