Wow I thought this was pretty sweet until the very last line.

"As the green teenager fell over dead from overexposure to radiation, Raven began rewrapping her love’s hand, put one arm around his neck, and pulled him down to her for another long and passionate kiss."

Haha wow that's pretty funny. Negative Man kills BB and they just go back to kissing like nothing ever happened. Wow.

Yes! BB died n Rae end up with Negative man!
Heehee.

-Aquaven0097-

BB IS DEAD! maybe now he will let Raven be happy

O-O...you are right about the humor, though. it was so ridiculous it was funny :D (no offensez) i liked it, but why kill poor bb? could you AT LEAST just him end up with terra?! T~T...i love this couple. except with the age difference he must be like...twenty something... and she's like, 16...? making there relationship sorta...ILLEGAL...how'd you get his last name, tho? and how did HE not die from radioactivity...?

Nice story. But Beast Boy dead? Oh wow, definitely something you don't read everyday! Hehehehe, AWESOME couple though... except for the whole age difference thing, though...

This is HUMOR?!

You find it FUNNY that Beastboy dies?!

Well, ok...each to his own...

uh... i like negative man...
that ending was kinda harsh though

you...killed him? doesn't that sound a bit...harsh? and I actually thought of this pairing when watching the battle. they seemed so perfect together! ...except for the whole age difference thing...

Discausting yet raomantic yet deadly...

Well any ways great story

that made absolutely no sense. i don't want to say it sucked but...

i like it!!
GO NEGATIVE MAN!
UP DATE ASAP!

That was good! But the whole killing BB thing a little gurastic, dont ya think,Lol funny though.

DING, DONG THE GRASTAINS DEAD!! **Laughs happily**
((Why do I like it when certain people, mostly the ANNOYING ** STARFIRE AND BEASTBOY, die??))
Man, there's only TWO NM/Rae's?!? Man, people need to branch out a little...

killing beast boy was cruel! and it was cruel as well (uncharacteristically--SP?) for Raven to ignore him and keep making out with negative man. but it was good story.

Lol! I loved how Beast Boy's death was so casual, dealt with in the background. "But...but Terra was a **, Raven!" A-mazing