Wow, you stopped right when it was getting interesting. Please after all this time, please continue...

Good beginning I can't wait to see more. please update soon.

Hey,
Your story is hott! Keep witting. I want to see what happens next. I hope Max actually talks with her aunt. I wonder how she is, and if she knew that she had a niece that was create...
Well keep going.

Seriously...Dark Angel and Desperate HOUSEWIVES? OMFG...How could you do that to Max? Jesus... Thank god there is only four chapters of this. And you know what? YOu're probably going to delete this review anyway so I guess I'll just say whatever I want here.

Firstly, Desperate Housewives and Dark Angel do NOT go...not in this lifetime anyway...Secondly, I see you're kinda of an MA fan, which in itself is already sickening (because Max actually thinks of Alec as her brother and anything more would be incest...) And your writing ain't that great either.

whats up with flooding the 'just in' page with all your fics in one go anyway? Seriously...half a page of your stuff...so sad. Maybe you should just go ahead and write for DH and stay there. DA doesn't need writers like you. HAHA.

please continue

why haven't you continued the story it might turn great in the end

hope you continue, even though I don't watch Desperate Housewives, it will be interesting to see how this develops.

The chapter was good, i'm realy glad you update the story, i am realy interested how the story would develop.

Go max! i cant wait for the next chap, please update soon!

Poor max! i hope she finds this relative of hers!

Im sorry but what? i cant wait to find out! a great chap!

OMG! i cant believe he has found her mum! i cant wait to see what she is like!

hey i like it. mostly becuase it wasa funny how you added desperate housewives to the story.so yeah i cant tell english is ur third language.the writing seem just fine.

story's cool... liked the link to desperate house wives.. :-)

Max seems a little out of character tho... a little too melodramatic...

plus now you've gone and made her a minor, we can't be getting in M/Lness ... at least without making Logan seem like a paedophile...

but its all good... love to see were ur going with this...

so this is goin going to be a despreate housewives crossover? I never watched that show.

and just so you know that in the pulse it was the east coast that got hit the hardest. the west coast wasn't affected as badly beacuse the rocky mountains serverd as a sort of natrual sheild, bluocking a lot of the waves form the pulse.