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| jupiter2005 2008-03-08 ch 28, | abuseawesome story cant wait to read the 3rd part that you have posted. keep up the good work. |
| TheBrokenHeart 2006-12-11 ch 23, | abusei'm sorry to hear about your brother and sister-in-law she's a ** to do that to him anyways i love the story! i love your writing style and you know what band goes perfectly while reading this story? Disturbed lmao |
| Megan Consoer 2006-10-07 ch 23, | abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
| greeneyez2 2006-09-30 ch 22, | abusehey please update |
| TheBrokenHeart 2006-09-17 ch 2, | abuseomg! story so far is just as good as the original! especially the outfits omg! i love it |
| raye85 2006-08-16 ch 20, | abuselol good chapter cant wait to find out what elios is going to react when he finds out rini is pregnant |
| Megan Consoer 2006-08-09 ch 18, | abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
| Momo Engiro 2006-07-31 ch 18, | abusemomo: WAH!! IM SO ESITED!! lawyer: interesting. in the fight, rini will- momo: MEIN GOTT, OPA!! SHUT UR TRAP!! if u guess, it wont turn out like we want it too!! lawyer: * >_ |
| lovedlost 2006-05-19 ch 17, | abusewow this is good |
| Spazztasticle 2006-05-18 ch 17, | abuseTT_TT Too damn short person! |
| raye85 2006-05-18 ch 17, | abusehey just wanted to let you know that i like you story very much, cant wait for the next chapter |
| Spazztasticle 2006-05-16 ch 16, | abuseWrite more soon! |
| lovedlost 2006-05-16 ch 16, | abuselovin these to chapters! |
| Spazztasticle 2006-05-13 ch 14, | abuseARGH! WRITE MORE OR FEEL MY WRATH! Muwaahahahaha! |
| lovedlost 2006-05-09 ch 14, | abuseok ok heres this for an idea when rini and elios finally meet in batle, he ends up failing because he realise he loves her but the memories of molly keep running through his head. then rini needs to get saturn to help o rsomething, not next chapter anyways but its a good start and i no i already have a chpater but why not another! bisous SS16 |