Please continue your story! It great piece of work, and you know what? If Cagalli dad would not have told her about Kira I'm pretty sure he would have been Cagalli a lot sooner.

Holy crow, that was awesome! ^^

I was looking through some of my past reviewers, and I noticed your name (thanks for that!) and clicked it at random. Then I noticed how many stories you had written; again, HOLY CROW! I picked this one because your summary sounded interesting, and KxC is totally kinky. You really did pull off the struggle and the intensity (and...inevitability?) of their dark love. I loved the drowning theme throughout the fic, too. Gah, I loved all of it! Deliciously, fantastically written. Now I'm quite honored to have gotten a review from you. =)

You'll be hearing more from me in the future, because if the rest of your fanfics are even HALF as good as this one, I'll be glued to the monitor for sure. ^.^ Awesome job!

~;~Shaku

This is undeniably one of the two most magnificent and precious Kira/Cagalli fanfics I have ever read. I really enjoyed reading it! It was, honestly, a real treat!

That was the BEST and darkest KC fic I've ever read. It was scary good.

This was very good, one of the best peaces i ahve read so far. I really love it, you did a very good job.

truly a work of art please continue it if you can

Great stuff. Honestly, you need to continue this. It's really super awesome good.

Whoa. I think this is one of THE sweetest, sensual and most realistic love fics I've ever read.

Beautiful really at first I thought gs was going to do it KiraCaga but then BOOM/BANG they're twins dissapointement ke I know but Athrun is SO much alike Kira so I didn't really care.
But KiraCaga will always be somewhere :D yeah though

It works as a oneshot. Don't think it'd work as a long story, as the two characters are together at the very start. People always like reading about how they get together. But still, great, great piece. If you DID do a longer story, I'd suggest doing something where Cagalli and Kira do something together before they find out their siblings. Just makes it more awkward, but reenforces the reasons why they like each other.

Hello! I do hope that you continue this. It's wonderful. Nice comparison. I'll keep this on story alert in case you continue.

...holy hell...seriously, this is the best Kira/Cagalli fiction I have ever read on this site. Please, please, please continue it! No other story for this pairing even comes close to this. It should be a crime not to turn this into a chaptered fiction!

I wnat you to continue!

The conflict that rose in her mind and its comparison against the drowning waters is just...intoxicating. You are truly an emotion-invoking writer, and my favorit so far.

Long live K/C. Somebody better give Fukuda-san a lecture on the many reason why these two are meant for each other.

PS - If you're doing another chapter or what, let us know!