Wonderful. Beautifully written...I still have the imagery in my head. Goku/Sanzo is cute though a part of me still gets a little squeamish about it sometimes, but this was just amazing.

It really is a shame the doujinshi for this fell through. Thank you for posting it in story form. = )

Wow. There was something mournful, even haunting about this; almost heartbreaking in places, yet hopeful in the end. Sanzo and Goku isn't a couple I'm fond of but that didn't lessen my love of this story a bit because you conveyed their relationship in such a beautiful, peaceful way.

It's very rare that I find a story powerful enough to move me, but I did with this one. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing.

Haunting and insightful, I love the way you've ended it on the brink of what may or may not be. It's sad and yet hopeful at the same time. I also like the way that you've managed to express the passing of time, and how it has eased and changed (both somehow sharpened and dulled at the same time), Sanzo's attitude towards life, the mision, himself, and the others he travels with. Beautiful work, as usual!

I like the setting and I like the tone. Well written and beautifully worded. Nice.

It's cute. A little sad and cute. I like it a lot.