(In response to Mitsuru Ayanokouji)
Well let's review for a moment.
When was the last time I posted up a new chapter for this story? Oh, I see. MONTHS ago. Why would I stop? For a number of reasons. Since you were SO nice in bringing it up, let's just review.
One, if you're going to flame me, you might as well get a real pename and face me like a real author/critic. I understand I'm wasn't so nice to them before, but now I can take them right.
Two, I understand how you must feel. Obviously you're some fangirl groupie who thinks she'll one day marry Zane. So I'll let you off with a few things.
Three, I see you've only probably read the 8th chapter, so you don't understand everything. I also see I've only gotten up to the 8th chapter, and nobody knows what else was going to happen.
Four, You might not know it, but I have been wanting to revise my story for quite a while now. I was going to rewrite the whole thing from scratch. Make the love more real, make the duels more interesting, and change a couple of big things that happened. I KNOW MORE THAN ANYONE THAT MY FANFIC HAS FLAWS. And you know what else? IT WAS MY FIRST ONE.
Five, Cecelia has flaws. She's annoying and bothers the hell out of the Slifers. Later on, she's hated by the Obelisk dorm too. Then, they get tossed into the shadow realm, she dies, gets a statue errected in honor of her. That's probably your greatest dream, huh?

This is the end of our little "review". By the way, her friggin name is Cecelia, not Mary Sue. Get your eyes checked.
*YOU'VE BEEN OWNED BY KATIE*
Lastly, fuck off, bitch. ^_^

^_^ ^_^ Have a nice day. ^_^ ^_^

Hey! it's me! can u guess who I am if not oh well! but this is execptional writing you did! keep it up!

I wonder if Jasper Dice (The OC I installed into this fanfiction) will be able to Duel against Zane and... win?!

Hi! I'm still lovin your story and I hope that you saw my cousins review but anyways Bye! Love Ya, April

What can I say? I myself am 12. Even though I don't seem 12...I think Oo;

Anywho, love the chappy! keep updating! ^^

“Oh, that’s right!” Cecelia said, “I’m not any one of the three dorms, I’m in my own dorm! Well not really! I’m Exodia Gold!”

You might want to consider changing that. There are only *three* dorms at Duel Academy; Slifer/Osiris, Ra, and Obelisk. Creating a fourth dorm makes your character seem Mary Sue-ish. Plus, I don't think that Exodia would beat the God cards "any day." The God cards are pretty powerful.

And about the whole roommate situation, how many schools actually let people of the opposite sex room together? That's one of the main reasons why all girls are in Obelisk Blue - since the Obelisk Blue dorms are the only ones with space for girls.

Other then that, the story looks okay to me. Your grammar is pretty good and you did a good job with keeping the cards of the characters consistant with the show.

Hi! i'm Aprils cousin!

I read this story in recommendation from her.
and even though i really don't follow yu- gi- oh GX i can say for sure that it is a very interesting story, and i hope you will update soon. I hope we can meet each other in real life in the near future.
Midnight

Is it ok if I have 2 guesses...? 14 or 15...

Anyway, I noticed in the theme song you tried earlier (dunno what chapter) you put 'you're' instead of 'your'. Oh well, it doesn't matter really.

I was extremely suprised at all the duels you had on there. Not many people can pull of the Yu-Gi-Oh! FanFic AND put duels in it. Awesome job! I'm sorry to say, though, I'm kind of tired of it. Maybe that's just 'cause I'm tired too. Still, I think you're doing very well with it. Syrus is so cute! Most definetly (is that spelled right? oh well) on my favs!

Thank u for the birthday note! And I'm still lovin' your story, I give you mad prps for this one! Bye:)

YUp! Its me the one who she was talkin' about. I love your story! SEE YA Later! (but to anyone who writs bad reviews about this story screw you!)

That was a great duel between Cecelia and Syrus. And just for a little info: Chazz now has Ojamas Green,Black,and Yellow. Some spell cards he has are Oja muscle for Ojama King, and Oja Magic which I forgot what does. But the point is, Chazz has Ojama cards in his deck. Cookie points for the story.

A REALLY good start. I like the way Jaden is picking on Syrus. It's kinda funny. the only thing is that on the paragragh before everyone was about to duel, you said that Cecelia and Syrus dueled next to Jaden twice.
But still, you earn Brownie points for a good story.

It was kinda pointless but good! lol. Anyway, I liked it. And Uhh I'm just gonna guess your uhh... 12? I have no clue. Probably older.

Cool chappie. as for the challenge, hmm, I'm gonna gue 13 for no apparent reason.

Yay! A good duel! Although u made a slight mistake: u summoned red eyes b. dragon with coth, but Red eyes was returned to the top of the deck. Although, it doesn't really matter 'cause they could have cothed the chick and then tributed that for the drag.

GOOD CHAPPIE! YAY!!