dude!

i love this...but i need more! more!

i always see your name on reviews. i take it you are addicted to ff too.

good work :)

Rarr, write something a little longer, like maybe two chapters-three- shi- go- roku- nana- hachi! Many more! (Thats Japanese by the way.)

Anyway, I refuse to believe your only fourteen. Then again, I sadly cant even really remember what it was like to be fourteen. I guess thats about a year after girls stop playing with barbies- though I still do at 16- but your writting is just different. It has a unique quality even though the idea of this story is widely used.

Brava

Cee