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Velorafe 3/31/12 . chapter 8
Thank you for this wonderful story. I'd love to keep reading but alas reality keeps getting in the way. This story is going very good right now. I eagerly await what further challenges awaits them.
Xessive 3/13/12 . chapter 1
For those looking for the third story: It is complete, it's just not on this website. The author's website also seems to be gone, but there's still a way to access it.

You need to head to the "Internet Archive Wayback Machine."

http : / / www . chainlightningstudios . com / text / tws / CDfull . txt

Go back to the date

17:49:58 May 21, 2004

You'll find it there.
bruno 9/27/11 . chapter 13
I love the story I want to know the website to continue reading your story thanks sorry for my bad English Greetings from Spain
SgtCanuck 11/8/10 . chapter 13
Carpe Diem can be found on the Darkscribes Eva fanfic site:

(dot)darkscribes(dot)org/story/88

Best Hikari/Shinji series out there; my favorite tied with Rakna's "I Used to Love Her"
Kapola Nuva 9/30/10 . chapter 13
i hope you finish it someday
Devaro Ayanami 5/5/10 . chapter 1
Oh the HORROR!
I have been going through my favs, and came across your stories. After reading Together We Stand and Divided We Fall, I tried to locate your third book, Carpe Diem, but it is not on FFdotNET nor is it on chainlightningstudiosDOTcom!
Please, if you will, email or PM me the link!

D.A.
Sun S. Li 8/10/09 . chapter 1
Truly. It is a marvelous addition to the TvTropes Fanfiction archives. The praise lauded upon your story is well-deserved. Of course it was a bit lighter take on Evangelion then I've been used to but wonderful none the less. 'Changing Seasons' , 'The Legionnaire", 'Cloud Nine', 'Flavor of Love', 'Hot Rain' and now your fic are the best S/H pairings hands down. I would advise you to look them up if you ever have free time. Mister Cyncial will have you cracking up with his one-liners and solider humor. DigiFruit has proven their self to be able to fight with the big boys when it comes to make outstanding oneshots. I've been with gunman since the beginning and 'Hot Rain' was during his beginning when he was in his prime. JErosin's 'Changing Seasons' is definitely a staple of S/H and I would have been surprised if you haven't read it. But I digress. A read that I have no regrets spending my time on and would love if you uploaded more on so I can follow you :p
Racheakt 6/18/09 . chapter 13
I'm an enourmous fan of your work, Hotwire. But I have a request...

My current big project is collecting all the best fanfiction under one banner, fanfiction's greatest.

You can find my C2 in my profile, but what I need to ask is: can you put carpe diem up soon? I think it would make an excellent addition to the ranks...
dylanredefined 11/1/08 . chapter 2
part 3 can be found on rankas fan fiction archive google it
dylanredefined 11/1/08 . chapter 13
brilliant only complaint no 3rd book :( and your website is down.
Patrickov 12/6/07 . chapter 1
I read all three 'books' somewhere else before finding it back on FF. Pity that book 3 didn't make it here.

This trilogy is probably the longest complete SxH fic, and by story standard it is also one of the highest (even among other kind of fics). To simply say it, what the author did was essentially tweak the original story line from early on so that Hikari plays a central role without getting OOC.

I must say I can't help but liking book 2 most. Both books 1 and 3 are awesome pieces but they somehow serve as (rather long?) prologues and epilogues. The development of book 2 is the essential of the story, and deviates from the original anime the most. Readers having knowledge of the original anime at respective times would find this fic's storyline creative, original, as well as making perfect sense. Two thumbs up!
RagnaBlade 11/3/06 . chapter 13
your web page doesn't work
david clarke 8/2/06 . chapter 13
whens the third book coming out
vic 7/13/06 . chapter 1
the friend has to be mana. i have never actually seen how she is in any way connected to the plot, but I have read that she is a pilot for a military organization, and very upbeat when she wants to be.

I also think that the angel that acts as a turning point in the series is #12. Just me i guess
Rouzeki Tadayoi 5/21/06 . chapter 1
Ken's Buddy, TetsuShojo(Iron Maiden). Mana Kirishmia, ain't it?

This story is awesome. I'll await more of your works, eagerly. Try an' pen a R/S for me though. I'm you skills can accomplish it.
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