ahahhaahah this is so lame and poorly written

This is a great story.

Ah! YAY! Good Ending! Coa Coa? That isn't Darien's thing, he would rather just kiss her, or whatever, he's sexy!

Darena(changed pen name though) Oops already told u .

Aw...this poem is lovably romantic!Aw...I love darien and Serena.

*Darenaforever/not logged in/(changed the pen name)

aw bless! cute, i luv it!

OMG OMG OMG OMG!I luv both chapters, the poem was good, but the storyline was romantic and cool! Please make another pretty please!

gah!it was lovey-dubby and sappy!I hate it.

SIKE!I loved it it was cute,hahaha.

now that i read chapter two(Mamoru wet his pants...lol)

LEAVE ME ALONE!_

This fic was so sweet.

This poem was good. I love Serena and Darien's love for each other.

AW! CUTE! And absolutely funny! Keep up the good work Meka!

You have a very intresting plot here, I should like to find out how it turns out! _

for your first fanfic, its okay, but for tips to improve, you should read some of alicia blade's stories. They really are something.

I'm glad you left out the lemon. Some of us are unhorny and just want to enjoy romantic, CLEAN fanfics about our favourite couple.

Great job Meka! It's so cute! Don't mind the basher, he/she's a low life piece of shit anyway...

Hope to see more from you soon!

Take Care

M.A.M

V gd keep up the gd work

hahahahah. that was the crappiest i've read in a while. lol. it's not ur talent