First off, that was pretty hott. Also firstly, it was well written and I feel like you had the characters down pat. They flowed well together, and it was a pleasure to read. I'd love to see another installment someday.

Talk about explicit! And they did.

It was good. The writing was nice, the emotion wonderful. Personally I can't say I liked the hareem stuff, but that's not in any way because of your writing- and happily had a good twist ending

Thanks for sharing... and if you ever write anymore on this one I'll be looking out for it!

_ Except my compliments on this well written piece. Your wording is exquisite; highly detailed yet not overwhelming. I especially commend your assessment of Fawkes' and Hobbes' personalities. They appear to be spot-on and realistic. Well done.

May your muse strike you pure and true

You are talented beyond belief.

How do you get the dialogue so true to life?