You can write. That is obvious. But this story just doesn't do it for me. I thought you first two chapters were far better written than your last one, but who am I to judge?
I like your character - I just hate the idea of the Hessian kidnapping her. It's not feminist enough for me.
But by all means ignore this review!

From one Sleepy Hollow fan to another.

Wow. This story is truly fantastic! I love the detail, and the Hessian, of course ;)

I hope you update soon, you have me hooked.

Oh wow! And here I thought I was the only who was interesting in the Hessian! Glad I'm not the only one! ^^ Please keep up the good work and I hope to read chapter 11 soon! ^^

~*♥Phoenix♥*~

you may be interested but e nomine a great german band, has a song called mitternacht and it reminds me so much of the headless horseman, and das tier in mir wolfen, thats a good one for him.
mitternacht (midnight) and das tier in mir wolfen (the beast in me,)

i have fallen in love with this story, you work is just-you cant put it in words. it was an honour to read this, how about the name wolfgang, mozarts name was wolfgang amadeus mozart. wolfgang is cool, strong yet mysterious. please update soon! sorry about your dad, i hope he is better

Oh My Lord...that was INTENSE. In both description and emotion and ...wow...I ADORE how you write. It is so much fun to read , your descriptions of things just defy convention. And this chapter...man, that was the definition of steamy...oh boy...More of the like, please!

How about the name Rolf? It's German and means "strong, famous wolf." Well, I thought it was sexy. Update soon!

By the way, your story is very good. I'm sorry about your dad.

Hey, about the German name, why don't you go with Heinrich? It's what I'm going to give the Hessian for my story. It's a good name for him.

well, i'm partial to the names heinrich and albrecht. i like the story so far! and, just a side note of interest, women are stereotypically portrayed as weaklings who faint all the time because they wore such tight corsets and other heavy garments. it was almost impossible NOT to faint (especially since they still wore many tight and heavy clothes during the summer as well).

anyway, i love the story so far, and keep it up!!

This story is really good!
Please keep going, I can't wait to know what will happen next.

Whoa!
I'm terribly sorry, I hadn't realized that the link I put in my previous review would not show.
Still, I believe the website's name to be 20-names. com, it is one of the best lists of names which are far-ranging in categories.

To be honest, I've never read a story styled like this, and I'm liking it! I like how you somehow managed to maintain a narrative style very much like the classics (something I've never managed to do), and still keep it fast-paced and entertaining. ^^
I'll be waiting impatiently for any more updates, I've always loved the Hessian character and you seem to capture his character very well here in this story!

P.S. Check out this 'site:
They've seem to have a list of some PU-RETTY good german names here, especially of the kind that sound bad-a$$ in my opinion. X3

a great update. I'll see if I can find any good German names for the Hessian.

Keep up the great work. :)

interesting chapter. I wonder why the Hessian brought Isabelle to Hell.

Keep up the great work. :D