OMR the poetry! *worships* This is really beautiful...I love how you extended the metaphor of love as a sword. The whole thing is so wonderfully symbolic, and perfectly Ryou and Bakura. And I'm not making sense. Is it good? Yes. Definetly.

That was... awesome! ;_; So beautiful, so... nice! I loved it! It... it nearly brought tears-wait! Damn! I'm crying now! Okay, it HAS brought tears to my eyes. So. Much. Darn. Beauty!

-sighs- I wish I could write poems like that... it was so nice. -defeated look- You're good at Tendershipping poems. Write more, please. The style of writing you have is very... unique and nice. No, /real/ nice.

Do continue with your most wonderful works of art.

-Flame-chan

I loved it, AWSOME! Write more!

wow...that was somethin. i loved it though. it was very cute but sad, but cute non the less. it was an interesting story. i hope to read more of ur stories soon. it was good. and i like ur style of writing, so keep up the good and start on a new story so i can read it.