Great story!

As in the case of most good things here, you don't have the reviews you deserve.

This is a living example of less being more. I appreciate your style of writing.

Um, shock compassing face... You need another chapter explaining this.

I love this story! It's awsome ^^

"** they." Favorite line, ever. Good job. I love how it ended, ** they. I can't stop thinking about that. "Yeah. ** they."

that...was so sad...in a very funny way...

yeah, ** they

This was...very suspenseful I liked it. Confusing as I don't know why Kiba killed 'her' or who he killed.

Ohh, so Kiba's going to where it's warm, and Naruto's going the other way? Aw, how sad, but good story. I love the originality and dialogue :3 *thumbs up*

it's cool how in this story and the 'stop thought' one you didn't really know what was going on until someone said something and then it hit you. these stories kick ** cuz they're different and original and stuff. really cool. i don't know what else to say they're just so awesome.

Short and great.

That's really my only words to describe this - I love any kind of short fic to do with the afterlife, and this is a prime example. Almost poetically written, but in a sense where you can understand it all so very clearly. Well done.

Very... interesting. I like it. It's kinda... sad. I wonder whose worse moment it was supposed to be... it seemed like Kiba's, yet like Naruto's... Great work, keep it up!

:) i like this story... its different.. unusual... a take on death and limbo thats different from everyone elses.

who'd he kill? ah, well. it doesnt matter anymore.

This is different. You don't see much stuff like this. It took me awhile but I figured it out before Naruto said it.

Like I said before you're a great writer. Keep it up.

And I've kinda always wondered: who (or what)is/are 'they'?

Great! I wonder who Kiba killed. Anyway, I liked this.

Wow...I have to admit, this is just...amazing. The simple dialogue fits the characters so well, and how Kiba didn't even realize until Naruto told him...

The apologies for killing her, a good repitition! And the vagueness. Wow. A definite fav!