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| ScienceGeek 2006-12-19 ch 1,  | abuseAw! I suspected, when the book was fiction-that this was where you were heading. But even so, the ending gave me quite an "AW" moment. Yay! |
| lantiscod 2006-03-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow difficult it is to recognize if you are others'type...Thank God Gil had given her Christmas gift every year...It's been six years...Would you think Sara could bear if one day Gil siad she was not his type...as they have walked so far...Great fic always brings people more than the fic itself... |
| Chiianna 2006-02-22 ch 1, | abuseIt is a very nice story. |
| leddy 2006-02-19 ch 1, | abuseVery nice and so true to character. The dedication from Grissom was great and the fact he brought her the gift in the rain was so sweet. I like the way they stumbled around not really knowing what to talk about. |
| spongebob 2006-02-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseoh... thats so Cuyoot! aw... grissom would make an awesome author! |
| odeepblue 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abusei loved it... although i did not quite get the ending, the writer's name is a faque and it is grissom or did grissom gave his thoughts for the book. sorry my english is not as perfect, is my second language...lol |
| cherry-kiss-red 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful. I really like this! That is something which can happen in reality... carrie ^-^ |
| viggygirl 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseGreat fic! Totally made me smile! Any chance of a follow up for this one? Nice work! |
| Charcoal Brown 2006-02-18 ch 1, | abuseThis just seemed so... real. I could see the whole scene unfolding perfectly in my mind. I really enjoyed it, thank you for making my day. Any chance of more? |
| ligaras 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful. I loved the concept and was surprised by the end - should have guessed, but must have been too caught up in the story as it was unfolding! Thank you. |
| silence89 2006-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was great! Light but not too fluffy or sugary, and they seemed very in character. I liked the ambiguity of it- they didn't make passionate rain-soaked love, no one had a breakdown, Grissom's inscription wasn't an obvious declaration of love, they were awkward and Sara was frustrated and Grissom got called out, and they were communicating and building bridges and maybe starting something in their geeky awkward way, which felt sweet and real. Can't wait for your next story. |
| Geeklove4eva 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseI really liked it! I wish he coulda stayed though!! But still... so good!! |
| Mystical G Panther 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseaw...that's so cute! little late though, but i loved it anyway! -mystical panther |
| LindafromItaly 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseit isn't boring...it's fantastic...you should continue...please!! |
| CSHighland 2006-02-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove This! More Please! Seriously, Grissom writing a crime novel under a pseudonym just *sounds* very real and Grissom-ish. Dedicating it to Sara, well, that's fluffy as hell, but also very real feeling (at least to this GSR fan!) I really would like to read more...if not additional chapters to this finely written, well-wrapped up one-shot, then as a sequel or other stories in the same AU. Please give us more! |