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| Juopunumies 2008-04-25 ch 3, | abuseThis is crack on wheels. Clearly the best post canon romancy story ficlet thingie I've read so far, granted that I haven't read a lot of 'em, but nevertheless... You have some serious skill with the keyboard (pens are outdated). The text flows like a river and how you portray Naruto and the way he has bonded with different characters and Hanabi now is very realistic. |
| Adran06 2008-03-08 ch 5, | abuseI'm not entirely sure if will get this, but I was curious where I can find this prequel by Matdeception at. Is it on this site? or another site? If you get this please tell me. I would very much appreciate it. TTYL, Adran |
| Angel Fantasy 2008-03-04 ch 5, anon. | abuseOh.My.God. I agree with you, Naruto... you're doomed. *snickers nervousely* |
| Paucius 2008-02-06 ch 8, anon. | abuseDamn man, quite a moment in the story you choose to have a morality attack, well i doubt you will see this review (if you keep you word) but it was a really good story, good luck with your kids (they will be with you until college) and your wife. P.D. i hope the guy that pick up this story had half the brain you have or it will be a waste |
| hellfrior 2008-02-02 ch 5, | abusethat prequel sounds really cool, could you send it to me also? |
| BloodySeraphim 2008-01-24 ch 9, | abuseNO! You left off at the worst time possible! Right when the three girls find Naruto massaging Hanabi's **! That's a HUGE cliffhanger...too bad you're not continuing it. |
| Convexbaka 2008-01-20 ch 4, | abuseHey! Am enjoying your story, could you give me the link for the prequel? |
| Greybane 2008-01-17 ch 9, | abuseGood choice of paths to take |
| peregrine829 2008-01-17 ch 9, | abuseI've said it once and I'll say it again: Good Luck and go with grace, my friend. I wish you all the best in reconnecting with your family. peregrine829 (Josh) |
| Even better then the realth... 2008-01-17 ch 5, | abuseAHAHAHAHA classic |
| Even better then the realth... 2008-01-17 ch 3, | abuseYay im so glad. but i dont think naruto should have been so old |
| Even better then the realth... 2008-01-16 ch 2, | abusei love it i especially like how long the chapters are |
| Even better then the realth... 2008-01-16 ch 1, | abuse** amazing it grabbed me and pulled me in then spit me out an excellent story |
| the grey mage 2008-01-16 ch 9, | abusethank you sir. you did listen to reason, also good choice. hope you can keep your involvement in this sector to a minimum. |
| goldfish demon 2008-01-16 ch 9, anon. | abuseI'm gonna miss you dude. |